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Reviews for Chi and Hideki together forever

By : algebrapro18
  • From sammi518 on July 29, 2015
    Hi i loved your story i really think you should continue writing keep up the good work

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  • From OrangeSama on August 30, 2008
    I can't wait that was great. Hope to read it soon
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  • From BunnehMaster on March 30, 2008
    i love it...please continue
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  • From NarsheDelvar on October 05, 2007
    A very interesting little story, if I do say so myself. Very cute. tee hee!! A little surprising for it to be your first fan-fic 'cause of how well-constructed it was compared to some other stories I have read. *cough* The only things that bugged me was the numerous grammatical and punctuation errors; some of them being so bad that I had to stop and re-read the sentence to make sure I got the right idea. But don't let that deter you. A valiant effort, and I do look forward to your update, if/whenever you do. *nodnod*
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  • From quamp on July 31, 2007
    BE CAREFUL.

    I had a fic which mentioned that Chii could have children, and the reviewers were merciless to me. As for the rest of it, please use a spell and grammar checker. There are sites that will do this for you if you google them. Overall, a 5 out of 10.
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  • From angeldaimon on July 13, 2007
    Really good theres really small grammar problems but over all I give it a 6 out of 5. Keep going.^^
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