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Reviews for Real on the Rabbit

By : absolom
  • From DMtehficmonster on August 07, 2007
    I love you, immensely ^_^

    I'm not even a fan of this pairing (To tell the truth, I don't like it!), and I love you for writing this. There are NOT enough Ergo Proxy fics here, not enough for anyone, but since I'm not everyone, I'll let you know there are NOT enough for ME! (I'll probably write some, though) I'm addicted to Ergo Proxy, and fanfiction as well.. so their combination reaches a level of perfection I can't describe.

    Re-l, (I know you called her Real, and I'm not correcting you, but I call her Re-l) I can see her acting the way you've written her, she's always thought so highly of herself, and being someone with status, she was "off-limits" I'm certain, to anyone but who she approved and controlled, which made her quite manipulative, among other things. But take away everything that held her up.. and all you have is someone waiting to be broken by someone stronger.. out in the wasteland, the proxy wins.

    Vincent was an excellent display of horniness, both him and the proxy--and the part where he notes his new outlook on life at the end of the chapter made me smile. Then again, if I were him, I would say something similar. (Re-l is hot ^_^) I have to say though, he's a bit sinister..

    I don't know how many of the DVDs you have seen, or how far into the series you plan to make the story, but without the "robotic intervention" a key storyline feature is gone, so I'd love to see what you do with that. If you're just planning for more sex, that's awesome too, though. Your call, and I will love whatever else you add to this.

    Okay, ridiculously long review over, sorry about that. Keep up the wonderful work, over nine thousand thank you's, just for you!
    -Dark Mrowlidash, the fanfic monster
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  • From Sadakoyamamura on February 03, 2007
    it is Re-L not Real
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  • From ANON - cephri on January 14, 2007
    yeah! more, more hardcore action (XD)!! there aren't enough smut for this series! your fic doesn't have that many mistakes in the first place (plus, the p0rn compensates for everything else).

    lookin' forward for your next fic~
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  • From ANON - bansheeblue13 on December 27, 2006
    Good fic...not enough fanfiction in this category...wasn't really paying attention to the mistakes, but really good first fic. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - @_@ on December 20, 2006
    whoaaaa...

    yea ergo proxy lemons tend to be slightly disturbing but i still like it.

    so......um......real is now...uh...addicted to vincent???
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  • From ANON - @_@ on December 15, 2006
    whooooaaaaaaa.........

    *speechless*

    i'm so glad there's a second ergo proxy fic!! there arent enough of these!
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