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Reviews for Sleep Sweet

By : PhoenixWolf
  • From Reokoofhyrule on January 21, 2010
    Hello, i just wanted to let you know i really like your story 'sleep sweet'. I have one in the works for Loki Ragnarok, the first chapter is posted at the moment but its nothing to exciting at the moment. Well, i would like to know what happens next here so keep it going if you can.
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  • From abelton on December 21, 2007
    I like it really like it so sweet and nice it maybe not a lemon but it is still good.(^_^)
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  • From dawnmm on July 11, 2007
    i find that i enjoy sweet i hope that you keep writing this has been very relaxing reading your work
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  • From evilfairy on February 03, 2007
    Your work is good. I did notice that you do have a few redundancies. "Kyo shrugged his shoulders" is not necessary. "Kyo Shrugged" is fine. There are a few more through out the story. If you go back through and reread your story, pull out the redundant statements, it will make your piece more concise and easier to read.
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  • From rakanasama on January 30, 2007
    you should keep going with the story... it's cute but i want more! Not to mention there arn't really any people who write fruits basket.... please please please!!!! I would love you forever an ever! *gives cookies and cakes and anything else and pouts* prease!?
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  • From shariahxhaikuforever on January 30, 2007
    omg that was soooooooooo cute!! i mean seriously cute!
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