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Reviews for Lanky S.O.B.

By : FingoForever
  • From Kazidoom on April 06, 2007
    @fuzzybunnytoo

    I recommend watching the show, then you'll see how great the style of writing fits with the characters. Anyway, nice job.
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  • From thecinnamonneko on February 14, 2007
    This is great! So sad, but it really kept everyone in character.
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  • From blood-and-lust-87 on February 08, 2007
    Aww, that was really sad...but really good, too. Nice job. :)
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on February 08, 2007
    The writeing is a little to matter of fact. It is written like a how to manuel with no how to. You got to make us believe they are real people and that there is passion, good or bad, it needs the passion. you can write but you need some personality in it. When we come here we want smut. Fact of life...sorry. This is not ment to be a flame because I think you have the talent to writ4e something but you got to put some smultz or breath in it. Try again and make me really FEEL it.
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