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Reviews for The cost of selfishness

By : priestessmykala
  • From ANON - ani on December 10, 2007
    wow!!! you really got the angst across without loosing the charas! only complaint i've got is the format - you should do something between the pov switches, even if it's just a line or something. all the 'he's confuse people until either name comes up.(speaking from experience here. '^^)
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