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Reviews for Mine Fields

By : psyca
  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2009
    Such a great story! And such a sexy Ayan... *drools* Uhm, sorry, it´s just that I like it when Aya takes Yohji as his. I can´t see why so many people see Aya as uke... I like it when he dominates Yohji *drop*
    Well, anyways, but the hot lemon was just a tiny part of why I liked this fanfic so much. You just have to love Yohji in this story... he´s so caring about Aya, he´s just so cute! I think my favourite scence was when Yohji was forced to stay at home by Aya, waited up for him all night and then took care of him in such a gentle way.... that was so sweet! *wants to cuddle Yotan and Ayan* And I think that was the point when Aya truly realized that Yohji wanted more than a fuck. And that´s was so special about this... Yohji is really really serious and he´s getting through all the ice cold behaviour of Aya so they finally end up together... so wonderfully written!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2008
    Heyo =)
    Well, I know I´m quite late with reviewing, but hey - better now than never^^
    First I have to say that I really really enjoyed reading this story! Yohji/Ran is an interesting pairing, they´re both complicated, but that makes them so great. And you showed all the problems they could have to deal with in a fantastic way. Especially the "Aya is stubborn and Yohji tries to get his attention"-part is great! I mean, that´s just how it is - Aya is always that stubborn and controlled. But Yohji is just the master of seduction, it was fun to read how he got more and more attention from the cold redhead... And the final lemon.. I just love it when Aya takes the seme part =) And it was so well written!
    So, I really like your story! You´ve got a very good style of writing!
    Bye, Layla
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2008
    this is a beautiful story, but IS IT THE END??? i'd love to know if there's more!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From katami on January 26, 2008
    Brilliant as you well know, dear. I loved this story and that ending was hot. Thanks again for letting me read it!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 25, 2008
    I loved this story! There was just something about the way Yohji pined for Aya that was very sincere without really daring to hope. I liked the patient way Yohji waited for Aya to be ready to resume what they had started, but, as Omi stated so succinctly, it takes an explosion to get his attention. It turned out Aya _was_ the explosion! Very hot seduction and the lemon was well written, leading slowly to the climax. All in all, very good work, Aya and Yohji served up hot just the way I like it. Excellent writing. Appropriately paced and brought to a super satisfying conclusion. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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  • From ANON - mm-c on August 20, 2007
    squee!!!! this was so cute
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  • From TrulyWished on May 18, 2007
    Aww, cute. Noting should be nothing, btw. Top of the page. Nicely written piece.
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