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Reviews for Pink Version

By : Bishonen
  • From SCIFIGUY55 on November 14, 2011
    This is a good start to a potentially great story. It would be a pleasure to read more of such a good story.
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  • From kuramasgirl on April 20, 2010
    interesting please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sarah20 on October 20, 2008
    i think her special pokemon she gets should be gardevoir and i think she should fuck it
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  • From ANON - Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl on February 07, 2008
    Well...its hard to say how good this is...there's not very much, is there? Do you plan to make more?
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  • From Bishonen on August 13, 2007
    I will write more of prma later on and some new stuff that's all mine like one about a girl wjos becomes the gim repaer and has to blance her new job and love life

    With Love, Iamsuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2007
    Cool, thanks for responding to my review! ^__^ I do hope you'll have Rain in it again because she was very neat like I said, plus if she's around then Misty and Delia can't be far off and they're total milfs! Anyways please write more soon, all your stuff is fun but it's when you make original characters that everything is awesome, like Lilith and the person you see as in Pram's Plaything! Those are probably my favorites but I'm sure Pink will join them! Speaking of that will there be any more Pram's Plaything or is that done? Sure hope there's more coming eventually! Thanks for reading bye!
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  • From Bishonen on August 06, 2007
    There will be some similaritiesbut not many that girl was named rain she might show up later not to sure just yst but there will be a new person showing up in a few chapters all i'll say for nor foul mouthed ninja girl.

    With Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2007
    Hey glad to see you're still going to give your original ideas for this thing a try, just because you don't succeed at first doesn't mean you shouldn't keep trying! Will this be totally different from the first Pink fic or will there be some similarities, because there are parts from the first that I'd still like to see. Like that girl I forget her name, she is raised by Misty and Delia, and she has a crush on Delia. That was good stuff, not only was it hot (a lot!) but it also had potential to be very interesting in how it would develop itself, you know? Of course you know, you're the author, lol. Well anyways, please update soon!
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  • From Zeroh on July 25, 2007
    Niiice! AWanna see more x3 I Really like Midori, maybe it's cause she's a but of a klutz it would seem. Can't wait to see her starter, my guess is.... A Dark type? Dragon type?
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  • From ANON - Imasukey Fan on July 22, 2007
    I apologize too. I think I was a little too harsh with how I said things to you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2007
    You have a point, I haven't given this story a fair chance. I guess I just got pissed off because I really liked the story about Pink and Pearl and really wanted to see it continued. I just get so angry when authors delete great stories. If this new turns out like any of Imasuky Lomae's works, then I'm sure it will be a great read. Sorry, please disregard my last comment, and please continue the story, I do look forward to reading it. I'M A BIG FAN!!!
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  • From Mangafreak on July 21, 2007
    interesting new story. looking forward to more.
    your humble servant and fan
    -Twisteddarkness-
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  • From ANON - Imasukey Fan on July 20, 2007
    How can you say it's crap compared to the other one when this one's only gone on for a single chapter? The plot's barely gotten started, there's been no sex yet, and barely any characters have been introduced. So a story doesn't look as good as a story that had gone on for 13 chapters and had developed itself and its characters when this one's only got a single chapter so far? Well no fucking shit, Sherlock. Maybe you should give it a chance to actually get going before comparing the two. Frankly, I think this one's off to a great start, if for no other reason than the fact that Pink isn't around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2007
    I have to say that this story was pretty good, and very well written. However, it was CRAP compared to the other Pink Version story you wrote! If you want to start over from scratch that is fine, but I don't see the point in discontinuing and deleting a perfectly good story.
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