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Reviews for A Beautiful Mistake

By : kimonomaker
  • From TaiKaiten on March 18, 2009
    truly an amazing story; my only qualm being the long period with no updates...
    I think i read this story about... 6 months or so ago, and only one(, maybe two,) chapter is new...

    So... that being said, i know life can be hectic (i anyone knows that, its me), but i would love you forever i you finished this story
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  • From ANON - Bridget on November 23, 2008
    This story is going great so far. Could you post more and send it to me. Either that or just notify me that you updated. THANKS.
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  • From TaiKaiten on October 07, 2008
    kaiten demands that you update soon *noddnodd*

    Sorry... my bout of 3rd person speaking is over now (i hope...)
    But, yeah... you do need to update... maybe with a bit more GP? (drools over GP fictions...) er... yeah... hehheh... ^.^" sorry, my muse has decided that i be random... and i dont have the heart to ignore her...
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  • From EzriCandy on September 28, 2008
    Gah! I hate that monkey-man bastard Matsura! He makes me think evil thoughts on ways that Tezuka could torture him! -growls at monkey man-

    Well anyway, the last few chapters were great and Hana-chan is just so cute :) I can't wat to see what you do with the next few chapters!
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  • From EzriCandy on September 28, 2008
    I'm really loving this so far and I think the personality change fits Tezuka in daddy mode. Great job!

    I think my favorite line in the second chapter was
    “Hey, piggy-chan, ojiisan is not going to steal your dinner.”

    That was too cute :)
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  • From masqatch on September 26, 2008
    ow im glad that you posted a new chapter. please do it more often xD.
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  • From lemonchai on September 25, 2008
    Yay, so glad you're still going! I really want to see Fuji and Tezuka get together in this fic, I love the angst to death and I'm excited to see how the whole Abusive bf x Fuji thing goes XDDDD (btw this is ychan in case I haven't told you yet - I'm now doing all reviews under new sn)
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  • From ANON - Pat_ace on June 30, 2008
    Hey there, I've just started reading the story today, and I'm already totally addicted to it XXXDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you write, and specially how you manage to keep the whole scene flowing constantly, without any jarring breaks or sudden turns. The plot is really interesting, and I love it how you manage to pull out different emtions from me towards both main characters. Specially with Tezuka, I hate him at times and at others I feel like he need someone to hug him and tell him which one is the right choice ^-^!!!!!!!!!!! I know you haven't updated in a while, but I do hope that you have not forgoten about this storie, and I really hope that you continue writing it; I would really love to read the ending.
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  • From ANON - shourin on March 02, 2008
    are you really gonna stop continuing this story? it's such a pity then coz it is a beautiful story..
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  • From sexypancake on October 25, 2007
    this is an amazing story. really suspenseful and heart-breaking. can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ychan on October 18, 2007
    Ooo I'm happy to see this story updated, ooo plot villain :D Semi-abusive boyfriend? -eyes sparkle- I love the angst (of course), and everything in Tezuka and Fuji's conversation... That's a lot of baggage. XD And no one knows but them? Hm... wah, I'm looking forward to the reunion! Even though now they've already met. :D
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  • From KoalasRock on October 14, 2007
    Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

    FUJI AND TEZUKA ANGST!!! UPDATE FUCKING DAMNIT!!!

    >Esu-chan
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  • From ANON - shourin on October 03, 2007
    when will you update.. i want to see the continuation of this story~..
    hana chan is cute.. i love the way you describe her character.. it highlight her cuteness..
    and fuji... ohh dun let me start on fuji...

    he is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo lonely.. and heartbroken.. poor creature!!!

    tezuka is like.. totally mean.. and if i am fuji.. i'll punch tezuka's jaw so hard all his teeth are dropping.

    and set that amy woman in fire!

    but she's dead and she gives birth to hana chan.. so...

    whatevah.. (no this is not a flame.. ^_^)

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  • From ANON - songswifteye on September 28, 2007
    Wow. I remember starting to read this a long time - or what feels like a long time ago. I'm so glad that it's grown since the last time I read it. I think that there were only 2 or 3 chapters. I'm really enjoying it. The characters are believable, if you think in the context of "over a decade in the future." And Hana-chan is terribly endearing. I can't wait until you update.
    -Song
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2007
    I really like this story. Tezuka as a coward who doesn't want to be gay, so he flees his feelings for Fuji. The baby's adorable. Can't wait for the next update.
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