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Reviews for Would You Love Me?

By : Duelriel
  • From OokamiJudge on January 19, 2011
    *prods Story* erm is there more after chapter 3?
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  • From ANON - Lex Mortem on November 08, 2010
    That's it??!!!! I want more!!! Please keep writing!!!! I looooooove IasonxRiki!!! ^___^ Thanks for your story!!
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  • From ANON - DeathjunkE on June 18, 2010
    Whooo! that'll teach me to read Author's notes! I got to chapter three and panicked. I read this story annually, i've always liked it and love that it wasn't tainted by the taming Riki fanfic (though Taming Riki was a very good fic i feel too many people take it for canon). Your plot was very good and i really enjoyed the way you explained riki's mutation.

    I cant wait until its finished again ^-^

    and another question, does this mean you are going to complete the sequel? I would love to see how that goes. I'll keep an eye out now.

    Thanks for a great story
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  • From ANON - ShiShi on June 04, 2010
    Just tell me one thing since i read this whole story already... will it end the same?
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  • From ANON - missmotoko on June 02, 2010
    I must admit, I was pleasantly surprised to see that you have decided to re-edit/re-engineer this story, which i absolutely adore by the way!! I discovered this site nearly a year ago, being that I am somewhat new to yaoi. Regardless that I am a BL novice, I consider myself an AnK enthusiast, ever since i saw the ova, I was hooked. I followed up my introduction to the AnK ova with fanfictions and novel(currently reading vol.3 "Nightmare")and it's been a passionate hobby of mine ever since.
    Anyway, back to your fic. Initially, you should know that I am strictly a reader, not a writer. I don't feel very comfortable with giving you criticism on this since I am not a very literary person and I don't know proper literary tools or devices to help you improve the work in technical skill. I won't bitch about typos/grammar and the like, I find it petty to do so, unless it's ridiculously bad and causes the work to be incomprehensible and all context is lost. I loved the original version and hope you don't veer too far away from that, but, improve it where you see fit. However, I am comfortable in lending my support and giving you encouragement if it will keep you writing more of these wonderfully sinful stories which I obsessively fill my time with. I anxiously await your next chapter.

    ...the only recommendation I have: don't forget to add more lemon, if you know I mean. I love excruciatingly long, elaborately detailed, deliciously slick and hot bed/sensual scenes...don't we all.

    -missmotoko
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  • From ANON - yaoifangirl89@gmail.com on June 02, 2010
    Was it complete or not done cause it says completed and it does not looke complete,it looks more!I want more!!
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  • From KotoriSensei on November 23, 2009
    Sorry, i already read two chapters, but my only conclusion: YES!!! IASON IS GOING TO KILL GUY!!! And i'll just sit, and enyoing it to my heart content...that stupid, son of a &%$#/*?%$!!!!!!!!!!
    Hope he suffers....a lot...
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  • From KotoriSensei on November 23, 2009
    I'm gona kill Guy...noway, Iason is going to kill him...or maybe he'll save us the problem and just kill himself...
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  • From KotoriSensei on November 23, 2009
    Jajajaja, poor Guy....too much novels. That's were people do usually learns that: vomit+not drinks+notsmoke+other stuffs=pregancy.... XD

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  • From KotoriSensei on November 23, 2009
    Well...i see Iason still Iason no matter waht....-_-'''
    Definitvely, a Blondie, who doesn't know ANYTHING about feelings....
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  • From KotoriSensei on November 23, 2009
    Hello! I'm just starting your fic...i came back in time to search for interestings abstracts of Ai no kusabi fics, and i found your!!! Quite interesting actually. Riki pregnant!!! This is the first fic i read with that topic on it...not that it botters me, actually i'm quite fascinate with the concept.
    Poor Riki, he must be feeling very sick, with the hormones all going nuts and Iason...smiles him? Of course he scream and run away...i will do it too....jijijiji
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  • From Enigmatic_Spirit on July 03, 2008
    you took two of my favorite loves: Iason and Riki, and the incomphrensable love an drama they share. plus the baby added in, im gonna continue this.! im hooked kudos
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  • From ANON - silver on June 25, 2008
    OMG!!! Why did they have to die!?!?! Damnit!

    ok..I'm done...I think the story about the boys growing up is a must lol
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  • From jade22d on June 05, 2008
    I'm mad at you.-points accusingly- You killed them after making sure I believed it would be a happy ending. You..you...I'm so mad I can't think straight. YOU MEANIE!!! -blows raspberry and stomps off-


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  • From ANON - oztan on May 11, 2008
    It now 2am in the morning. I can't stop reading this. It was so bloody good. I now have wake up at 5:30am to get my self ready for work.
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