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Reviews for Teacher Appreciation

By : sadisticdemonslayer
  • From ANON - Jonathan Schmidt on January 09, 2008
    Its been a while since you wrote this but you really deserved another review so here it is. It was pretty well done and I applaud the lack of any especially 'deviant' sexual behavior on either Kei or Mizuho's parts as that would be a bit out of character. This also might be the only fanfic I've seen that pays any attention to the sexual frustration Mizuho must have felt (along with the loneliness and worry) after being separated from her husband for a year. Kei at least while sad and knowing something was missing, was able to pass that time without any conscious memory of her.

    My only complaint might be that it was a little odd to focus so much initially on Kei's pleasure if this was supposed to be all about Mizuho. On the other hand perhaps it was simply that way because she was so eager to thank him for the necklace.
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  • From ANON - Anime_Freak317 on September 24, 2007
    Nice story. What threw me off with the flow of the story though, was when you put the word "pussy" in there. I would recommend that you change it into a softer word for the female genital. Maybe like..."hidden flower." But outside of that, it's a nice soft fanfic with a nice comedic element to it.
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