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Reviews for The Sugar Addict and the Killer

By : lizsnape
  • From zenakoshka on October 17, 2007
    Wow, I missed quiet a bit of this story...damn school! Anyhow, the chapters are as enjoyable as ever. I like the fact that your writing is descriptive and elaborative without being too complicated to read. Basically, it's just right for us readers!
    "Yagami walked in to see his son smiling at Ryuzaki, who was typing franticly. "
    That made me giddy. I'm not sure why, but the though of Yagami walking in and becoming baffled at the scene is extremely amusing. Maybe it's because he wouldn't expect his son to be smiling at Ryuzaki in any way, shape or form. ^_^
    And the cloth foreplay is hot (*_*)! Hoping for that lemon in the next chapter. ^_^
    Please keep up the work

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  • From zenakoshka on September 27, 2007
    "So if he told us to jump off a bridge..."
    "No, of course not. We'd question him first. Then we'd jump."

    Lol. Nice. I'm glad your story follows the general sequence of the anime. The bits of humor embedded in every chapter are always welcome. I can't wait to see how Ryuzaki and "Misa's boyfriend" get along after Light's confinement. Keep writing please! ^_^

    ~Zena

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  • From zenakoshka on September 24, 2007
    Aha...I'm sensing small specks of Misa-bashing. Needless to say, that isn't bad as a concept of its own. But I think that Light would be more...attentative to her being tortured, since she is vital to his conquest as Kira. Just something to swing onto the platter. Otherwise, I am enthralled by the L and Light's kiss, as well as smirking at L's commentary on the "petite bath" Watari prepared for him when he opened the door of the limousine. Nice job on the chapter! I can't wait to see what Light "must do" to save Misa (confession and confinement, I"m guessing? >;)) Please continue with the story!

    ~Zena
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  • From zenakoshka on September 21, 2007
    Interesting...it's a tad rushed, but never the less catchy. The conversation between Light and Ryuzaki (in the limousine) had me chuckling and grinning for a while. I hope you continue with this story.

    ~Zena

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