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Reviews for Mission: Midwest: Schwarz

By : vbruce
  • From bibbiesparks on June 25, 2011
    Please tell me you are going to write some more to this story because I just Love reading this and I can wait to see what going to happen next.I also can't wait to see what happens at the dinner party.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on July 10, 2009
    I am horribly embarrassed that you added a new chapter in April and I just now found out. I see things are starting to come together. I hope Weiss isn't supposed to protect such sleaze bags as these Andersons who pimp out their son. I'm looking forward to all the fireworks when Sasha and Aya finally meet. Though sporadic, this story is awesome in scope and concept. Poor Nagi. Wish he could take Chas with him when they move on. Finally, someone who can understand him. And boy is Schu in for it...and not in a good way. Great chapter--sorry I didn't read/review until now. Thanks for bringing it back from limbo.
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  • From Tazzy on April 08, 2009
    Um... oops?

    *cackles* Busted!!!!

    Is it wrong to want more of this? Well, any of your Weiss stories actually....
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  • From katami on August 08, 2008
    Loved this! Poor Nagi is going to need therapy by the time this is over - either that or he has found his soul mate. I wonder if Brad and Schu would mind a daughter?
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  • From Tazzy on August 08, 2008
    *howls with laughter* Love Chasity! Love! Love! LOVE!!!!

    She's a hoot and it would be wonderful to see her there as Nagi's "date"...
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  • From zetsuai2005 on August 07, 2008
    Very informative chapter. So the Andersens are in up to their teeth? I love Chastity and the added dimension she brings to the plot. Too bad Nagi hasn't always had a friend like her. I can barely wait until Sasha and Aya meet! I'm enjoying this story so much! I am amazed again at how well you do dialogue. Maybe short, but there was a lot revealed in this chapter. Brilliant, as usual!
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  • From Tazzy on May 15, 2008
    Oh yeah.. I wanna see the "Whites" meet the "Blacks" *cackles*

    *snerks* Omi and Nagi shaking their heads and going to hang out with telepathic Miss Crane while the "adults" end up playing Spy vs Spy a la MAD magazine....
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  • From zetsuai2005 on May 15, 2008
    Ah, so Sasha gets the news first. What devilish plans to thwart Weiss will come out of this? I think Aya will be a match for them, what with lethal stilettos and knife throwing, but the other Weiss may be taken by surprise. Really, though, I still expect Sasha and Aya to bond on a different level that neither the Black family nor the White family can comprehend. Excellent writing again. Short but moving the plot along. I'm on the edge of my seat!
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  • From katami on May 14, 2008
    Just the thing to give me a giggle on this Wednesday of evil. You are a joy, Phoenix. And Farf clearly can't be allowed near the crayons anymore.
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  • From Tazzy on April 25, 2008
    *howls with laughter*

    *gasps for breath*

    Okay, each time I didn't think this could get any funnier, it does......

    *cackles* Oh, can't wait to see Nagi explain what he was doing with a neighbor's daughter while on a mission.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on April 25, 2008
    Awwww! I was happy for Schuldig that he was getting it on with Brad (remember Yohji's predicament at the present) then he got busted. But at least the interruption didn't stop the action. Nagi's little friend better clear her phone's memory before a snooping parent or peer sees the video and notices that his 'mother' has a few extra parts that most moms don't have! I love your humour! What's worse than fighting? Maybe to a fifteen year old. Excellent construction and pacing, but the suspense is killing me!
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  • From katami on April 24, 2008
    Ah, Phoenix, that was the only thing that made getting up today worthwhile. Love it! You are a brilliant, wicked woman and I love ya for it.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 17, 2008
    Oh, this is juicy! A fellow 'freak' has him pegged instantly. She could be a great hindrance or a great help to Schwarz's mission. Maybe Nagi will see a little action while they are in small town America. Please keep this story going, it's the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Well written. Ah, your imagination knows no limits, and I guess my depravity doesn't either. Can't wait until the two redheads meet ... at the party?
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  • From Tazzy on March 15, 2008
    *blinks* *blinks* *blinks* Mrs. GOtta Poke My Nose Into Everyone's Business has a Goth lesbian *telepathic* daughter???

    *cackles* Serves her right! And Schuldig's gonna flip over that, isn't he? Someone to talk to and terrorize Mrs. Crane...

    *smirks and waits for next chapter*
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 21, 2008
    What can I say? This is getting better and better each chapter. I never would have thought Schuldig could discipline himself to fit in so well and not blow their cover or the mission. I love how Brad is already treating him as the little fraulein. He is sure to reap the benefit of the expensive clothes in other, less clothed ways. So now we know the target but not _why_ they are the target. I can hardly wait until he meets Aya. Talk about a cat fight! Excellent dialogue, great pacing. Fabulous, of course! Oh, and your story, too.
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