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Reviews for Born to Fly

By : YamiBakura
  • From jeisvenka on April 18, 2008
    I'm absolutely in love with this fic. It feels a lot... looser? than some of your other fics (no, I'm not sure how to explain that... both styles are fantastic, however.)

    Beautiful.
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  • From on November 07, 2007
    As I said earlier - the idea of Nagi being the doctor and Omi - the actor is rather brain breaking, unfortunately - the whole plot is getting brain breaking. I think you should slow down and spend more time on chapters. Well, I hope you will find it constructive...

    "Jei is a very capable empath," he said by way of explanation. "He's the one keeping your headache at bay while we figure out what the hell you did to yourself to get into such shoddy condition."

    Whoa? Empathy is about sensing emotions. An empath can't do something like this.
    And why Farf skills were undeveloped? He was a grow up man, never mind that his power never had anything to do with the empathy. Not even close to it. He is also very OOC.

    I don't know what to prescribe you," Naoe said at last. "Give me a list of your allergies, and I'll see what I can do."

    Is it a doctor? Mamoru's allergies would be written in his mediacal record - especially since doxylamine sends him into anaphylactic shock.

    And I have only read the first part of the chapter...
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  • From Juniperbreezie on November 07, 2007
    I really like this story. Poor Omi, he just can't get away from schwartz. And Farfarello/Jei as a doctor is just too funny. So, what's really killing Omi? Please continue this story. Thanks.
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  • From on November 01, 2007
    I kind of like it. The idea about Omi being an actor and Nagi - a doctor is rather brain breaking, but on the other hand at least I haven't fallen asleep.
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