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Reviews for Snapped

By : Ahria
  • From theyaoimistress on November 19, 2007
    aaaww how cute! i love it! the romance and the hot stuff and a bit of anger in the same chapter. good job!

    see you
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  • From KansouAme on November 18, 2007
    I agree with the two reviewers above. (must have more prep or it will really hurt)

    Nice start! I love this couple and would love to read good fic about them. Surround this piece you just wrote with more plot and you would have a great fic. Seriously... ya did really good, keep going! ^_^
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  • From spookymuffin on November 18, 2007
    Nice fic. Short, sweet and enjoyable.
    My only criticism would be Doumeki taking Watanuki without *any* preparation at all... ouch!

    Otherwise, great stuff. I loved Watanuki being his usual bratty/screechy self there at the end.
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  • From DuosAngel on November 18, 2007
    Not bad. Wish there was a bit more to it. But great for a PWP.
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