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Reviews for Jaedite's Revenge

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  • From VFSNAKE on September 02, 2010
    Nice! Mars is under thumb (among other things) and soon more girls will fall. WHAHAHAHA!
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  • From Scorpinac on September 02, 2010
    And boy are things heating up now. Jade's making his power play, and the Sailor Invasion is finally imminent, provided it doesn't backfire in their faces. And somehow, I agree with Jadeite, Adamite's not to be trusted, at all! As to the Makoto scenes, I dunno, I just don't see her as the type to pick up a guy at a bar for a one nighter. But, hey, whatever makes you happy. Either way, I look forward to the no doubt big action sequences of next time, hopefully in less than just under seven months! Until chapter 13, then. Laters!
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  • From ANON - pinksugarhrtattack on February 21, 2010
    omg! !!! fantastic! Was very sad when I saw the past update was last year...and then much to my delight there is a new update. Please don't take so long to write more. I am very eager to know what happens with Rei and Jed! And I think its a good twist haveing the outer sensuous show up just in the Nick of time!

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  • From Darkling on February 19, 2010
    Noiw I've head this story of yours up until chapter 11 too :) . I'll say, though this one appears to be less dark than your "Black Moon Triumphant", it's also good. Quite the interesting twists we are having here - the Youma are getting overconfindent because of Venus and Mars being in their current state, but this chapter around, Tenorite paid the price for being overconfindent. Futhermore, back in the Dark Kingdomn, both Jaedite and Variscite are finding out that they may not be as much in control as they wish that they were, which is an interesting twist, heh.

    With Tenorite's death and the newly arrived reinforments, it appears that the Youmas "gotta catch'em all!"-campaign has come to a halt for now, so one cannot help but wonder if you'll let it stay at being only Venus and Mars that gets captured - at least, this way it would seem like the youma can't make much advance - politically speaking - since both major faction now has a "sailor pet" to use for political support? Well, in that case it's probably fine, even if some of us'll bemoan that we won't see any other sailors get captured and trained as well...

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Scorpinac on February 18, 2010
    OMFG, you're back!! To be honest, I was wondering if you were even still around it's been so long(a year and a half, actually).

    Cool chapter, and nice to see the Outers finally make an explosive entrance to the action, though while I am happy that Ami escaped enslavement, I also find myself sad not to get to see what sort of "training" Tenorite had in mind. Oh, well, cie la vie. And now, of course, the Senshi have their ranks rebolstered. Nice touch, by the way, that Tenorite didn't recognize either of them. And I take it Chibi-Moon isn't actively fighting the Youma for some reason? Cause i note she was listed as going in with Moon and Mask to the one attack. Ah, well, no matter, things are finally moving forward, and hopefully and invasion/rescue mission is forthcoming. Until chapter 12, then. Laters.

    (I may actually re-read chapters 1-10 just to remember what all's happened until since it has been so long...)
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  • From ANON - Fostersb on February 17, 2010
    I am so happy that you did not abandon this story. I was waiting for an update and I really can't wait to find out what happens to Mars and Jadeite. I feel bad for Ami, but I get the feeling that the good guys are turning the tables. Update soon.
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  • From Leeslane on February 17, 2010
    Glad to see this updated. Do we have any chance for a Jupiter or Uranus chapter?
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  • From JOler on January 25, 2010
    Is there any chance of an update ... even a small one? Please don't let this fic die.
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  • From JOler on November 08, 2009
    this is an excellent story, please update soon.
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  • From AkariTenshi on September 27, 2009
    It's been a long time since you last updated this story. When will you update again?
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  • From JOler on August 29, 2009
    Will there be more Jaedite and Mars in future chapters I'd love to see if she is able to turn him around without his realizing it. It sounds like he might be starting to have some sort of feelings for her even if he is in denial himself and trying to fight anything he is starting to feel.
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  • From JOler on February 14, 2009
    Please update this story soon. I love how this fic is going and hope to see more of Jaedite and Mars soon.
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  • From whogirl on August 01, 2008
    I really like this fic, how well you've set up the political tensions and everything is so descriptive and easy to read and visualize. I can't wait to see if Tenorite goes out and captures a scout, or if Jaedite or Variscite try to win more people over by capturing more. You've said the next chapter or so won't focus as much on Mars and Venus, so that will be really good to see what the others are up to and if Zaherite winds up with Sailor Moon as Jaedite promised. You've just laid such amazing groundwork I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - JWM on July 22, 2008
    An ok chapter, it gives a better look at Venus and shows her as someone who doesn't just sit back. That said, as a practicing Muslim I'm a bit concerned at the portrayal of the character Amarite. I don't think that you intended to offend anyone, but in the world we live in it might be better not to go too deeply into religion. Beyond that, please update soon!
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  • From Scorpinac on July 21, 2008
    So another General is ready to capture himself a pet, huh? or is Usagi gonna throw herself into Mamoru's bed for some sexual comfort? Well, either way, I look forward to it. Laters!
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