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Reviews for Boy meets Girl

By : papapapuffy
  • From JulCan1987 on August 28, 2014
    Riku x Saya and Riku x Mao, please.
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  • From ANON - Sakura on November 09, 2009
    I really liked your story, it was really hot and interesting. However, I don't think they had that much time to have sex, and I don't believe Riku behaved like that. I just couldn't imagine he was sexually experienced, too. His personality was too innocent for something like that. Of course, Diva had some mental influence on him, but I think Riku was so scared he couldn't move. But anyway... I liked the story:)
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  • From ANON - Zakiyyah on June 24, 2008
    I believe this was the worst story I have ever read, sorry to be rude but its my opinion while your a writer you have to be prepared to receive criticism. Personally I do not believe Riku would act that way a twelve year old virgin would be scared out of his mind. Nor did they have that much time to have sex. IT was like like a one minute commercial dude. Lol Um..I also believe Diva did most of the movements and Riku stood frozen I guess you was trying to make it more interesting. BUT me and my two sister agree we have never read anything! EVER WORSE THEN THAT!Check your typos and please! Make it more realistic that shiet wouldn't have happened!
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on March 21, 2008
    I've read this before and feel it deserves some commenting. While the basis of the story is a bit twisted it still is quite well done. Its fairly reasonable to think that Diva had some mental influence on Riku, both from the way she could get in his head to the lack of signs of struggle when we see his body. We are also told how the blood of a chevalier desires their queen's sister to some extent.

    One thing I found a bit unnecessary was the whole thing with his penis being so big. It just seemed out of place. That is there was no reason to make him so freakishly well-endowed.

    The ending of course is sad but to stick with the story events it needs to be. Still, I think you should have included some brief line about Diva's reasoning. She simply seems to kill Riku for absolutely no reason. In the series she alludes to having done it in order to take possession of Riku (in her insane mind at least). That is she tells Kai that she doesn't see what she did as killing him, rather she made him hers forever by making him a part of her (hence how she proceeds to spend so much time looking like him).

    I don't know if you even want such a serious review, but here it is for whatever its worth.
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