Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Ocean Avenue

By : MakikoIgami
  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    All my guessing are wrong but hei!, let see this way...the human kind will keep on reproducing thanks to the very straigh sons of Musashi....jiijijiji
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Ah!!! Kurita with a beard!!! Jajajajaja, he is so cute, but with a beard...mmmm jiijiji
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Just a short phrase: Ken, the second son...mmmm....i'm suspicious about who he bring to his room....i doubth is a girl.....
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    I like Mamory. In fact i think she likes yaoi, and that's way she is sooo understanding whit her husband affair...jijijiji I'll be...buajajajajajajajaja (devil's laugh)
    Anyway...so...Emi is sena and Susuna's daughter? Jiijiji, sena as a father!!! I have to see that!!!
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Ok, now everything is just to much weird. No matter what, i don't think i'll be so happy to see the man who make me lost a child and used to sleep with my husband...and me...and.... well, you get th point.
    It's just creepy, they are all friendly and all...Maybe i'm just a bicht but...hey, i'm human and they don't.
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Now i undestand Musashi (sorry, i just can't call him Gen) and Mamori's relationship....they are, more than anything friends, which is good, by the way. And she knew of their realtionship, so i'm starting to think that she actually doesn't love him (Musashi), more like, apreciate him as the father os her son...i' talking bullshit? XD
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Well, i actually though Hiruma will kiss Musashi's ass from there to Alaska...but hi didn't...XD
    To bad, i wanted some action!!!
    JIijiji, next chapter!!!
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Mmmmmm...i can't belive what idea goes through my mind....it very suspicious they name their oldest son "Youichi"...i mean. If he wanted to make Hiruma feel bad, thats centanly the way but...Youichi has 20 years old...and the other is 10...quite a difference...althrough we don't know the other one age, it's still very weird...and the fact they (Gen and Mamori) didn't just one kiss in their mouths...? Mmmmmmmm...anyway. Second chapter: very intriguer...
    Report Review

  • From KotoriSensei on September 20, 2009
    Hi there! Nice start!!!
    It seems you are going to handle a very deep plot, congrat for the idea.
    I'll keep the reading. So far (1 chapter) it promises a lot!!!
    Report Review

  • From octolizzy on February 12, 2009
    Wow, this story has been going on for over a year. I'm pleased at how its progressing. I don't think I ever mentioned how cool it is with the whole Yellowcard theme going on. I sense this story is wrapping up now, and that is always the hardest part. I plan to keep checking back every once in a while. Please keep it up, I will definetly finish this.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cosplaycat on May 01, 2008
    God you write good smut!
    Whoooh.... I just need a minute.... whooh....I was awesome, okay?
    Can't wait to see where it goes.
    ....anybody got a smoke?.....*faints*
    Report Review

  • From cosplaycat on February 26, 2008
    Waahh!! Please don't let this idea fall by the wayside!
    Your style gives me such great depth from each character that we've heard from, and it even has me conjecturing about all the "what if"s.
    I don't know if you've gone ahead and read all the way to the end of Eyesh online, but since i'm still enjoying #18, I've got all these ideas about Hiruma-kun. Augh! You're so mysterious!! Why's he not a family person? I've got this whole background story on him forming in my head over here and it's driving me nuts 'cuz I don't know where you'll take the story! (Case you wanna know; he's probably from one of those struggling, family-business middle-class families; and before he met Kurita 'n Musashi he never had many friends cuz the other kids picked on him for his looks; an' he learned the art of blackmail from a fatefull encounter then puts it to work in making his parents' business prosper; then they find out and there's a fight but he's got enough on anyone he wants by then so he can live on his own......) Oh! See what you've created?! And that was without even trying!!!!
    Please rifle through your papers and pull this story toward you,have a look,and i'd love to see what comes next.
    Please regard me kindly,
    cosplaycat
    Report Review

  • From octolizzy on January 29, 2008
    Please don't give up on this story, it's way too cute to leave it at a cliffy like that.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!