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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From RiamtheWanderer on May 26, 2008
    This was a great time to bring him back, I wonder how he will affect them later on. It's nice to see you updating regularly.
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  • From PlantangelJchan on May 26, 2008
    Oh my god BEST CHAPTER EVER!! L rocks even harder now in my opinion and yes i can see him chasing ducks as I went to the park today myself in cosplay earlier and chased geese so this is kinda of a weird ironic happening that I would come back home and read a chapter about L chasing ducks...I'm actually kinda freaked out now.....;;>_>.....
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  • From Tulip32 on May 26, 2008
    ....O.O.....

    Wow...L is HIGHLY possessive of his valuables. ^_^. I believe that this was also proven by the ring that he gives to Raito. I'm quite surprised that Matsuda and Misa haven't noticed it on his finger yet.

    So, Mikami returns... and gets his behind beaten into the ground. Is he going to try and press charges? He is a lawyer... so I would think that he would try and get revenge the legal way. Not that L can't beat him in court. XD. I am very curious as to what will happen in the coming chapters.
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  • From Duomi on May 26, 2008
    Omfg. *laughing* The duck thing...! L dodging the duck. That nearly killed me. His absolute bafflement and fear was wonderful!!! I also loved how sneakily Raito convinced him to go to the park, and that putting his feet in the grass is what decided L.

    Also, I'm glad Raito's able to actually get L outside sometimes...! It's amazing. And I also like that Raito's still nervous about showing their relationship in public and hasn't completely settled into domestic bliss.

    *mouth actually fell open when Mikami touched Raito's thigh* That guy-- just-- woooooow. (Okay, that was a startling display of eloquence...) That shocked me! And then he calls Raito koibito! I knew L would punch him. I'd have punched him.

    I still like Mikami. *laughs*

    I liked this chapter muchly! It had cute parts and violence to Mikami-- I mean, violent!L. L chasing the ducks was actually, crazily, something I could picture the real L doing in this situation! He's never really had a chance for a childhood.
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  • From SarahRebecca on May 26, 2008
    Wow. All I can say is wow. This story is so amazing, I absolutely love your style of writing and how you portray Light and L, they both seem very in character to me. I loved the thing with the ducks, it was hilarious xDD And I was so happy when Mikami got the shit beat out of him. He deserved it, the bastard ^__^ I hope that Mikami makes more reappearances soon, I quite like violent, possessive L :DD Well, keep up the great work on this story and please update soon! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Lex on May 25, 2008
    Love the story... It has put a huge smile on my face. And I have got the feeling I will be grinning like a loon all day =)

    Anyway, I found your style quite pleasant to read and so far I love the way you depict the characters!! Raito being all inexperienced and having difficulties at the beginning does not sound too far off his personality in the manga (before he finds the Death Note anyway)... and it is quite cute!!! Raito is my favorite character... Ahem.

    I like how you portray L as manipulating situations to his advantage... and as a real pervert at times too =) Sounds like him alright!

    Now, I would say that the mysterious sender of the flowers is our loveable-but-slightly-psychotic Teru-kun. The biblical reference might have given him away. Ah, he was so disappointed not to get Raito's nude painting. I am totally sympathetic and sharing Teru's pain. I mean I would also be horribly upset if I could not get such a wonderful painting. I mean it's Raito-sama's NAKED, lucious, delectable, and did I mention NAKED body we are talking about here!!! Ahem, digressing again.

    Anyway, I hope to read more of this! Keep up the great job! I am sorry not to be able to offer anything more constructive than "I love it, I love you and I can't wait for more!!" - English not being my first language at all, there is not much on which I can comment ;)

    Most sincerely,
    Lex
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  • From ANON - qurota ayuni on May 24, 2008
    I-shall-review-every-single-chappie-when-i-am-not-in-a-hurry-to-go-to-cram-school!!!!!!


    So i shall rant as fast as i can. brace yourself)

    THECHAPPIESWEREGREATANDSORRYIDIDNTREADTHEMSOONERTHEYWEREBRILLIANTLYMADEEVENIFTHEYWEREOC--YOUROCKMYSOCKSOFF!!!!

    x0xx0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0qurota

    gambatte on your updates!!!!!! love the sweet annivarsarry gifts--- hw u noe L was part hungarian? :D
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  • From silverysora on May 24, 2008
    I been reading this for quite some time now and I have to say that this is one of thee best lxlight I've read so far. Please continue with the awesomeness. ^_^
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  • From Kuragari75 on May 21, 2008
    I have a sneaky feeling as to who may have sent thatm but it's really just a hunch. Anyway, loved this chapter... it was so cute! L jealous! XD hope to see more soon!
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  • From Dotowe on May 21, 2008
    slain flora My goodness, I read this at work and I couldn't stop laughing!

    Such a mystery! I'm looking forward to more!

    Joie,
    Gloria
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  • From LamicaLee on May 21, 2008
    Wow, I didn't think I was going to like this story as much as I did. But it being L x Raito how could I resist? I love what you've got going so far, my friend put me onto this yesterday and read most of it through the night, losing precious hours of sleep; woke up and finished reading the remaining chapters. xD Soooo worth it. I loved the part with the flowers, I'm probably not alone in suspecting who exactly sent those flowers. ;D Keep up the awesome work, I'll be looking forward to your future updates. ~Lamica ♥
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  • From ANON - Neo on May 21, 2008
    I really like ur fic it is one of my favorites keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    and i m sorry to bother but i need help finding a fic do u know how i could? its abbout L being female!!! pls tell me!!!!! thanks
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  • From Tulip32 on May 21, 2008
    Ooooooo! This has something to do with Mikami, doesn't it? HA! that weird perverted freak can't be held from Raito, his "God," for too long. Although, now, he will have to deal with a very possessive world-famous artist. ^_^. I have a feeling that Near shall somehow become involved while trying to ruin Raito's business as usual. XD.

    This chapter was amazing. We, the readers, should be thanking you for bringing such a marvelous story into the fanfiction world. ^_^. So thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on May 20, 2008
    I don't understand why you erased that part. I didn't think it wasn't fitting...
    If you have a short chapter you can always put a sex scene to make it longer :P
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  • From ANON - yuneek on May 20, 2008
    I'm gonna guess Mikami is our mysterious rose-man? Haha, what a creeper XD I can't begin to explain how much I love this chapter! I'm an absolute sucker for L/Light fluff~ And you delivered perfectly! Jealous!L is icing on the cake :D I'll be looking forward to your next update (i get giddy when I check and see that SoM's been updated XD) and thank you for all the effort you put into writing SoM!
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