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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From Saka on March 05, 2008
    HAHA! They got to hang out together for a while! And now Raito is gonna shower at L's place. HEHE! How fun that must be for him. Anyways I so can't wait to see what's gonna happen next with the two of them, update soon!
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  • From ANON - ana on March 05, 2008
    hello!
    I really love your story!! it's so amazing
    raito is so cute when he's frustrate! lol and L OMG he's more candid than ever, poor raito. I love them
    and L an artist it's a amazing idea, and the paint with raito as model was so fun, lol
    see you soon and good luck
    bye
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  • From ANON - Lila on March 05, 2008
    Probably from lack of L yes he's my favorite character...Anyway love the way the stories going good stuff :)
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  • From Kuragari75 on March 04, 2008
    ooooooooo..... Light in a shower alone with L in the building... hmm, sounds very much like a trap to me. lol, wonder if L just steals his clothes. XD can't wait to see where this is going... love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on March 04, 2008
    Woohoo, camera time! I love hidden pervy L.
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on March 04, 2008
    You did an excellent job in this chapter, as well as the previous one chapter 6. I'm glad that you incorporate other key Death Note characters into ch 6 because it just really seemed to fit well and it made the fic more authentic to the fandom. If you could, please put some more Mikami in the story, I find he always tends to spice a Death Note fanfiction up. Thank you for posting, and please update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Sean on March 04, 2008
    Oh wow! I just got finish reading all seven chapter your story is so awesome! keep up the good work :)
    This chappie is awesome hehehe I kind of feel bad for Raito oh well...
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  • From GreyPenInk on March 04, 2008
    And a shiver goes down my spine. Please. Please don't tell me L has cameras there, in the bathroom, in the shower. Or worse a peep hole. Oh god, I can somehow picture L's next paintings being of naked, wet, showering Raito. Gak. You know I'm normally all for LxRaito (L seme and Raito uke) but in this story, with the way you have them.... I'm not sure I support it. On another note it was really cool that you included Mikami, Nate, Matt, Mello and Ryuk! It's awesome that Raito has a rival in Nate. I hope to see more about it of them in future chapters. Yet I was unclear about the whole Ryuk and Rem thing. Are they friends of Raito? But I thought he didn't have friends. Hmm.
    P.S. I did notice the little paragraph you had on the plaques by the painting. It was... yeah okay.
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  • From goddess8878 on March 04, 2008
    This is just the funnest, cutest story ever! I love all the little touches you sneak in, like the apple stress relief ball. And oooo, tricksy L! And Light still has that stick firmly wedged in his posterior! LOL I truly think this is one of the few stories I've read for Death Note that doesn't make me hate Light, or at least remember that I hate him. This is just so much fun!
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  • From ANON - recipe for insanity on March 04, 2008
    Hello again. It is kind of you to update as regularly as you do! Thanks for making the commitment to see this story through to the end. It's delightful. On FF.net, presently there is another story similar in that L is an art teacher and well-known artist simultaneously with Light. It however focuses on Mello and Near's relationship. Light and L are just friends, but their quirky qualities shine through. You have managed the same feat here. While a little more OOC, the essence of their personalities, such as Light's need for control and L's need for pushing people to the limit just makes me laugh. Despite being a huge fan of the Manga, there are times when I like my fandom fic a tad less angsty and a little more fun. You have managed to not only infuse the story with humor but also, develop a sweet, romantic beginning for the two most obsessive, pig-headed geniuses in DeathNote :)
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  • From ANON - Ketsueki-ken on March 04, 2008
    SWEET!!!! I love this! Man, the last time I saw this story, you only had two chapters up. heh heh that was a while ago, and I'm so happy, with the chapter thus far! *bounces on the spot* I especially loved how L used Raito as a subject for his paintings and the just now with what I guess was an attempted kiss. God....it's good. I can't wait for more!!
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  • From amenochikara on March 04, 2008
    WAH! What a way to end the chapter! *pout* Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! (As usual) I look forward to next week's update!
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  • From IntHellsing on March 04, 2008
    You're such a tease!
    I like how naturally they behave around each other.... and I'm so glad he took up L's offer of a shower. I'll practically be counting the seconds since your next update. XD
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  • From ANON - Kitty on March 04, 2008
    No Raito! Don't! I'm 94% sure L has cameras in the bathroom. He should have just agreed to the new pants... L is such a pervert, and to think he was accusing Raito of being sexually frustrated.
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  • From ANON - Morli on March 04, 2008
    Lol interesting and without obvious grammer or spelling errors, all in all a good read so far, look forward to more :)
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