Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for First Time... of Sorts

By : pontaloon
  • From ANON - MegaGamerPiro on November 19, 2009
    Oh, please do a sequel! A little rough, but great first story. Only a few minor errors. No, Ikki did not have carpet. I checked. LOL
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kathryn Reel on May 25, 2008
    THAT IS SO NOT FAIR, YOU SHOULD HAVE CONTINUED IT, T_T. IKKI AND KAZU SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN AGITO AT THE SAME TIME FUCKING HIM INTO THE NEXT LIFE UNTIL HE CAN'T EVEN WALK OR TALK. I admit, it was an awsome story but I would have enjoyed Agito being the uke ( receiver ) for once, but anyway, koudos they should make an actuall episode of this for Air Gear.
    Report Review

  • From Fluffyhoo on April 07, 2008
    ummmm IKKi sounds ikcy, AND YOUR STORY WAS VERY FUNNY I LAUGHED ummm LOL...
    but jeez there was soooo many high vocab words grrrrrr me was lazy to look them up in dictonary!!!!!!!!

    AND THERE WAS A FEW THINGS I DID NOT COMPREHEND FOR EXAMPLE:

    WHO IS THE CROW????? is it some stupid bird from the street or a perverted scarecrow trying to get in on the action (NOW THAT WOULD BE SEXY!!!!!!!!)

    WHEN AKITO SAYS “I’m a virgin”
    I don`t get it, how can akito be the state of virginia ? funny nevertheless, I would have preferred California "I'm a californ" just sounds better and rimes with questionable words.....

    ”Their lips touched and soon their mouths were tangling in a frenzy of tongues and saliva” EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW yucky yuck... WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR COULDN`T YOU HAVE JUST SAYED THEY FRENCH KISSED.....



    "nibbled on his earlobe" ha i know where you got that idea from........... uh wait that sounds weird NO IT WAS NOT ME....I AM INNOCENT....

    Ikki leaned over further and bit him on the neck
    HAZZA FOR VAMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!SEXY!!!!!!!THERE SHOULD BE MORE OF THAT!!!!!


    AND GO KAZU AND HIS DILEMMA!!!!! I LOVED THE ENDING IT LEAVES YOU WANTING MORE UNLIKE THE BEGINING WHICH HONESTLY WAS A LITTLE HEAVY FOR ME WHO KEPT ON GETTING DISTRACTED BY PEOPLE I AM NOT EVEN TALKING TO ON MSN...

    WAIT DID I JUST FLAME YOU OOOOHHH NOOOO " you’ll just burn down the flamer’s house with them"

    FLUFFYHOO'S ROOOF IS ON FIRE HE DOES NOT NEED NO WATER LET THE MOTHERFLUFFER BURN!!!!! FLUFFY UP YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!


    IT'S GON RAIN MEN HALLELUJA!!!!

    YES, I WROTE THIS WHILE UNDER THE INFLUENCE OF ALCOHOL AND/OR DRUGS OR SO I WAS LEAD TO BELIEVE
    AND PWEASE NOBODY BASH ME THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW!!!!!! SO IT MAY LICK....

    sincerely,
    well maybe not so sincerely, hell
    insincerely,
    your friend Fluffyhoo and his pet kangaroo.
    sorry for all the caps i have a serious case of caps lock button anxiety......
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Cream on March 17, 2008
    oi. the story was good, keep it up dude(yes i'm writing this because i fear my wife's wrath...).
    Report Review

  • From ANON - see...i told you i would review on March 17, 2008
    Hello there!!

    well, i must say, that for someone who has no information about the characters, or the canon plot, you wrote it well enough for me to understand all that was necessary. i suppose the fact that it's a PWP helps quite a bit, but ANYWAYS! on to actually reviewing. that was really hot. it's really well written, and i really love that (now, i'm warning you, i'm not too sure that any of this will make sense outside of my head, but we'll see...) i could pick out elements of you-ness in your style.
    the content was equally good, even though i'm a bit confused about the whole multiple personality thing, what mattered was the sex, and it was good sex. i mean, for a 'first time' (i'm kinda confused about that...so his body has had sex, but not his personality/mind?) it was really awesome. i love you (don't tell karine) for not making it the way everyone else does with the super reluctance and shit. it was realistic within its own realm, and rather refreshing.

    so, write on, and i look foreward to reading more of your stories!

    your mother (how creepy is that?)
    Report Review

  • From BatDemonKuronue123 on February 17, 2008
    That was wonderful and really well written. I loved it.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - howl on February 11, 2008
    I think it's nice. And nice mention on Kazu's comment about Agito/Akito's ass! Man there should be more IkkixAkito/Agito fics! Thanks for this one! ;)
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!