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Reviews for Let it Will Be

By : Hnoss
  • From mamarita on February 23, 2008
    I love this story- I would love to be there if Ryu and Kuma really did try and force a big carrot up Yuki's ass! That would be such poetic justice. Yuki is a jerk - who is he fucking anyway? DLS
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  • From Saka on February 22, 2008
    Alright right now I'm feelin all talky- as my family has told me all day long ^_^;- so this might be a longer review...Heh

    *snickers* Ok the last line had me imagining Yuki looking behind him at the giant carrot going 'What the hell is this' while trying to figure out how the carrot got up there. ^_^;; weird I know but I can't control my mind sometimes it seems.

    Ahh and the hot spring man- Tatsuo- (I can't remember the word right now I want- sometimes words just fail me). But I swear he almost sounded like the Hot spring guy from Sukiysho. Except without the hair falling off or anything.

    Ryuichi wrote on a priceless art piece. Hmm yup yup that sounds like him. What are people gonna do with him I wonder....Hmmm Hey maybe we should lock him up. *evil grin*

    Hmm and what is up with Yuki? I mean now I'm really wondering it's like whoa...With every chapter I read I want to beat him up more and more. Especially this chapter...I mean how can he be so mean to such a sweet person like Shuichi? If I knew someone like him I'd be all like...Hmm I guess Ryu with him... >_>

    “Don’t ever let America go off its medications.” Aww but we're fun that way! *pouts*

    And by the way! That was so evil to have Ryu wake up. I was all like AWESOME They're gonna go at it. Then boom he wakes up and I'm like- no...wait Ryu wasn't done yet. Hehe

    But let me tell ya this is such a cool story! Update soon I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Sa-Chan on February 22, 2008
    Yay a new chapter and just as great as the last one. I truly love how you portray The wonderful Ryo. I hope stupid Yuki (stupid in this story) gets what he deseves. Great work and please update again soon!
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  • From Saka on February 20, 2008
    Ohh Ryuichi is having just so much fun torturing Tohma isn't he? I love the joke he played on him. Gotta looooove his scheming brain. This is such a cute story and I love it! i can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 20, 2008
    Such a cute story...and you made him so deliciously devious...well done
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  • From JenniferC on February 20, 2008
    I really love this one. With all the sillyness and then the angst it's a great combo. Really looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work.
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  • From mamarita on February 19, 2008
    Aww, Ryuichi singing to Shuichi and hold his hand all night. That's true friendship. Yuki better watch out!
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  • From Saka on February 19, 2008
    Aww how sweet of a chapter, though poor Shuichi! How can Yuki be so mean to him- I mean he's just so lovable! So totally and completely lovable. But I guess that's just how Yuki is huh. Anyways I loved this chapter and I so can't wait to see what their trip has planned for it. Update soon! I love it when I see an update with this story!
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 17, 2008
    So far so good...it sometimes is hard to remember that beneath that child like exterior, beats the heart of a master manipulator
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  • From mamarita on February 16, 2008
    It's so sweet. Eiri can be such a bastard at times, but that's Eiri.. I can't wait to see what happens next- lemon????? DLS
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  • From Saka on February 15, 2008
    Aw these two chapters were awesome! I can just see how much fun it's going to be with Shuichi and Ryu together! Heh I think it's time to feel sorry for the world now! Though I can't believe Yuki and how he acted it's like such a meanie head. See that's why I think Shuichi deserves someone better *cough*Ryuichi*cough*. Anyways these chapters are just so much fun to read- gotta love how Ryu is able to suddenly make stuff appear. ^_^ I so can't wait to see what happens next while these two are together. Update soon.
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  • From mamarita on February 15, 2008
    I really like the way the 1st 2 chapters have gone. That little touch of Shu-chan puking at the end was comical. Keep up the good work. DLS
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  • From Saka on February 12, 2008
    Aw wow for your first Gravi fic this is an amazing story. I really love how it is starting. And I so can't wait to read more. Update soon!!
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  • From mamarita on February 12, 2008
    This is excellent, I love it. Yuki can be a real SOB at times, and our poor Shuichi can never catch a break. Please write more soon! DLS
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