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Reviews for Uesugi Pride -Working Title-

By : hircineshound
  • From ANON - sammy on April 23, 2010
    love this!!!! please more soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 20, 2009
    wow! this is such an amazing fanfiction, it's so true to the characters personalities. *swoons* poor Naoe, what Takaya did to him what just rude, but it's all necessary to stay true to takaya's character. Naoe is still going to have the worst blue balls of the century. hahaha! i kid, It was just a moment of immaturity there.I eagerly anticipate more story!!! good job! *gives you cookies*
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  • From nekogirl1 on November 11, 2008
    Oooh very very interesting so far. Poor Naoe. Hmm, is Naoe gonna be the uke in this?
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  • From radcat on June 01, 2008
    I just read some of the reviews. A story must start and then build up into its plot. I liked how you ended Chapter 1 with Naoe being given the command to come up and see Kagetora. I liked how you wrote chapters one and two. You are the writer and creator of your story. You take us on the ride and decide where the plot and characters take you. Some people do not understand the creative process. They probably do not understand that they do not understand. A reviewer without experience can be difficult to take. I think you are doing a fine job and hope you can forgive Lucas. I hope Lucas can also take constructive criticsm...and maybe he just needs to try and write his own story and realize how difficult it is. He might be happy with his take on fanfiction. Hope this helps.
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  • From radcat on June 01, 2008
    You are doing well in creating a MOB story. I feel for Naoe but the war between him and Kagetora is memerizing. So Takaya is getting to be more like Kagetora? Or vice versa. Hope you continue.
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  • From hircineshound on May 21, 2008
    To everyone who has reviewed thus far~

    Thanks for the reviews so far, guys. I'll try and fix the speller and gramming soon enough, though the only problem I've spotted is a misspelling of 'assess'. Glad you're enjoying it.

    Oh, and Lucas. I have something to say to you alone, so will the rest of you please avert your eyes? Not looking? Okay.

    Lucas-

    Seeing a review like the one you've left is always disappointing. It pains me to think that the only reason people read fan-fiction is the fact that they haven't the imagination nor the drive to come up with lewd fantasies on their own. That being said I hope that one day you will come to see that there is much more to fiction, and life for that matter, than sex.

    If it pleases you to do so, I'd like you to come back and reread this once you are past puberty, and you may understand that the chapter you are referring to was meant simply as character development, not as a shallow attempt at exciting the readers hormones. The 'skipping out' as I believe you called it, was a necessary point to usher in further elements in the future of the story, without which I could not continue to write this piece of fiction.

    If you are offended by my work then please, I beg you, go and read any random bit of pwp fluff and simply replace the character names with Naoe and Kagetora. They're all written the same anyway, so it's not as though it would matter who the story was actually referring to. I doubt you'd care about settings and such, after all, you don't seem the type. Better yet, just go and rent a 'skin flick' if you are old enough.

    I may have promised smut, but I have never said it would go far, nor did I say it would be in this chapter.


    Now... If anyone else is offended, like our dear Lucas, please feel free to say so. All constructive criticism is appreciated, as are questions and comments on plot and character development. Pleases do try to spell the characters' names correctly, and do not use chat speak, and I will be sure to answer you in the most cordial way I possibly can.

    - Yours, The Author
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  • From ANON - Lucas on May 21, 2008
    I loved this when you started it, and I read through most of it, but why did you skip out on the sex? It was so cool untill he was like "Leave, Noae" and then I just stopped reading. WTF...?
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  • From ANON - K-chan on May 11, 2008
    I love it, of course. But It's not done. Which means, FINISH IT. ^__^
    a couple of grammar....isms; nothing a beta can't cure (not enough to require one, however). Overall, a very pleasing piece. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - D on May 10, 2008
    I'm very interested now...
    I hope you write more, it's very rare to find a well written coherent fic in this fandom.
    Keep the chapters coming!


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  • From ANON - manikin on May 10, 2008
    Started quite interesting, I hope you will keep it up :)
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