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Reviews for Mikan Sunrise

By : Bishonen
  • From ANON - The PD on July 06, 2008
    Well that was very good, however one point, since this is a review and not a "Woot good job kthnxbai".
    Jas is an immensely shy fifteen year old. Both of those points would make her scared to just BE around Claire let alone just throw herself into Mistress role. Her character fit perfectly up until Claire agreed, then she acted Mistress FAR to well for a CHILD ordering around an ADULT(teen, I forget Claires age) as a SLAVE for the FIRST TIME EVER.

    Or you can pass it off as Sabrina was in her Gym controlling Jas, and then it's all hunky dorry!
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  • From ANON - Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl on June 02, 2008
    Wow...I think this is one of your best ones yet. Not onliy is it as hot as always with you, and I really like the story you gave these two, it's sweet and cool! This was just plain awesome! Nice reference to Sabrina and Erika from your other stories btw...any chance of seeing them all having some fun together? ;)
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  • From NeoMiasma on June 01, 2008
    Great job as usual, Imasuky. =D I like the idea as Jasmine as the dominant, and Clair as the submissive.
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  • From Mangafreak on May 30, 2008
    awesome work as always.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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