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Reviews for After hours

By : Bishonen
  • From CecilHoshino on May 01, 2010
    I would go in depth in reviewing each and every chapter I may have missed up until this point, but, frankly, they're all so good, I can really only think of one thing to say for all of them except for the most current.

    Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn, son. Seriously. Beautiful.

    As for the most current? Well...as you could probably tell from previous posts, this really hit home with my key interest, so, I really have to give props to you. If Mary's break coincides with one of your's, then I say rest, brave champion. You've earned it. At least this story's earned it.

    Love, the director,
    Yoshimo Sullivan
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  • From Mangafreak on May 01, 2010
    damn this was a hot chapter. i loved how you got Caroline into the slave thing with May. i needed this. can't wait to see part II.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From Mangafreak on April 19, 2010
    wow, i can't believe i missed those last two chapters before seeing this one. so here's a three-part review.
    -For the Calista and Eve chapter- super cute and i loved how you worked in the time travel thing
    -For Kidd Summers and Karen- Awesome couple and i really enjoyed the different potions you had them use. especially the loli one, that may just give me a few ideas.
    -For Bridgette and Lanette- Short but enjoyable, they make a cute incest pairing.

    all together, loved the new chapters and now i'm hoping to finish my next pokemon chapter as well. Can't wait to see what's up next.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From megadeth425 on April 17, 2010
    I'm impressed by your output lately. It's pretty quality stuff, and seeing it on the front page ever second or third day is great. Keep it up, man.
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  • From ANON - Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl on April 12, 2010
    Been a while since I read this last and you've been hard at work! Candice's chapter was great, what a sexual dynamo! The part with Delia was my favorite of course. Johanna's chapter of firsts was totally great, too, gotta love those milfs! I love the idea of Gardenia becoming a nudist when Rosie won't ever take her clothes off, it's kind of funny! Lyra's fun to read, I wouldn't have thought that I'd be into a fetish of so much cum but she's so cute and you make it so sexy that I was totally into it in both chapters (especailly number two, since it had Cynthia!!) But My favorite chapter since last time I reviewed is completely Jasmine's. OMG, that was SO AMAZING!!! She's like the cutest sexiest and best dominatrix I've ever heard of, everything was totally sexy, and it was so sweet at times, too! I just can't even describe how much I liked that chapter. Keep up the good work I'll be back sometime soon!
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  • From Mangafreak on April 12, 2010
    wow that was a cute chapter. it's sort of inspring me to do that request you made for my pokemon story involving the kimono girls. i think i'll make it the next chapter after the one i'm planning on doing this time.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From Mangafreak on April 09, 2010
    wow that was hot. Lots of fun to read too. can't wait to see what you have planned next.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -twisteddarkness
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  • From CecilHoshino on April 09, 2010
    Yay! I always wanted to see Angela get payback on Aya for the bondage she was put through! I gotta admit, this shoots right to my top 10 favorite chapters in all this; this was sexy and such a delight. These two have potential in them for future scenes (heck, you could have Janice get the best of both of them, or have them both get her, or any combination of two-on-one), and I look forward to more of your work in this and other fics.

    Love, the director,
    Yoshimo Sullivan
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  • From ANON - mike on April 06, 2010
    i would like to see if cheryl and or her gardevoir will make an appearance on DJ mary or if you would eventually add onto garderotica because that could be just as or even more epic then after hours
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  • From Mangafreak on April 02, 2010
    this is a reply to the review you gave on Crossing the Line Pt II. I'm glad you liked my anti-aphrodisiac idea, and I wouldn't mind at all if you used it. also, i'd like to make a pairing request. since you have Jasmine finding more girls to be her slaves, i thought about her apprentice Janina. maybe she could be Jasmine's next slave, with her approaching Jasmine about it.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From Mangafreak on April 01, 2010
    wow that chapter was hot. the cum filled tub, Cynthia drinking Lyra's cum like a water fountain and the last bit about all of lyra's cum being a powerful aphrodisiac and Cynthia soaking in it for hours. words cannot describe how much i enjoyed it
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From Mangafreak on March 28, 2010
    awesome chapter, i absolutely loved how you had all of Cynthia's lovers get together for an orgy. i also love the Phoebe and Anabel pairings. i think that the both of them are incredibly cute and putting them together makes them even cuter!
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From CecilHoshino on March 24, 2010
    ... ... ...Well, I do think that my loi--yeah, my loins just exploded.

    And goddamnit, that was after Jasmine bound and gagged May with their underwear! I wasn't even a fifth of the way in! I mean...WOW! That was a LONG chapter. You coulda split it into two parts, but, WOW! A marathon of sexy bondage! I...I don't know what to say, but, I think I love you forever now! (Also, don't care what Jasmine said, Clair was not missing out choosing the vibrating maiden because daaaaaaamn!)

    So, uh, yeah. Great chapter. Almost intimidatingly big chapter, but great chapter. Feel...feel free to take a break from it for a while. Think the poor girl needs time to recover from all the raw sexiness that just got added.

    Love, the director,
    Yoshimo Sullivan
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  • From Mangafreak on March 24, 2010
    that was an unbelievably great chapter. i'm really getting into Jasmine as a mistress. it's easily become a favorite of mine. i can't wait to see which girl(s) she has join her next. i also can't wait to see what you do in the next chapter.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From ANON - silentlucidity on March 15, 2010
    As always,an excellent chapter. I have an idea; I think you should do a double guest show,with Cynthia and Lucy. Oh and have you seen the sprites for Heart Gold/Soul Silver? Sabrina is smoking hot.
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