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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - brad on November 16, 2009
    hmmmmmm mabye i should have read what you guys were saying in the review first i thout hardly anybody read this good story (i know i made spelling mistaks i hate spell so much I CANT SPELL FOR FLEAS!!!)
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  • From ANON - brad on November 16, 2009
    hello it's been 3 weeks since i read your story and it is the best story i have ever read (i dont read books alot) i was hoping you can get chapter 9 done and it is at a supence moment so im ichin to read chapter 9, i herd you dont think any budddy reads this but i do so thanks.
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  • From ANON - Vernon Bellhumer on September 11, 2009
    PLZZZZZ TELL ME YOUR WRITING MORE i want to know what happens to Blaziken and Iota
    its a very GOOD story
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  • From ANON - Doctor Thoth on September 06, 2009
    Perhaps a ritual to revive the dead is in order, or may be we should just find Iota and inject him with the zombie flu.

    Screaming about Richard Nixon from on top of a keg by now
    feel-good-ologist
    Doctor T
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  • From aragdoll on August 23, 2009
    Seems like it was more of a spasm than a revival.

    Iota, you tease us.


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  • From kuramasgirl on August 12, 2009
    i love ur story so far. u should really update soon. riolu is so cute!
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyono on July 11, 2009
    I read this once before, and I really enjoyed it. But when I came back to the site for some reason I couldn't find it...mainly because I was being stupid and couldn't remember where this story was located. But now I've come back to find more chapters to read in addition to re-reading what I found so facinating...

    Well, long story short (too late), it's an excellent story. I can't wait to see how it develops.
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  • From on June 09, 2009
    Hmm...you're not dead.

    Sorry for helping propagate that little rumor. Ah, well; your "death" spurred me to work on my own Lucario story.

    I'm a big fan of parallel storylines (I've got 5 going in my main story right now), and I like the way you've been weaving Subject_14's story around that of Noah and Riolu's. Dr. Michals is a darkly humorous result of a thirst for knowledge gone too far, and I get images of Mengele-esque experiments when I think of him. And while I try to avoid putting real-world labels on songs in stories, Mozart's Requiem does suit him and his work quite well; haunting, calculated but somehow organic, and unfinished.

    I am curious, and I'm sure it will come to light at some point so feel free not to answer, if Riolu is also a product of or is otherwise related to the group responsible for Subject_14 (I've taken to simply calling them The Organization). I'm a sucker for stories with sleeper agents or something similar, and I imagine that they bred a lot of Pokemon, with pre-natal conditioning to be blindly loyal when a trip-word or something is uttered, and then distributed them as eggs. Possibly a Dr. Laverd project? Possibilities, possibilities.

    The only thing that I'm not loving, and this is just a writer being picky, as the amount and depth of exposition that the narration affords us for things that we don't really need to know. For example, Team Galactic's attack on Jubilife City. There is a paragraph's worth of description of the Auras that Roark's Alakazam sees and about that "Mark of the Warrior" business. Now, obviously, I'm not privy to what you have planned and if the Mark is going to play a larger role later on, but if it's not then it's an unnecessary tidbit.

    But that's just because I'm fixed in my narrative ways. It's not a reflection on the work as a whole; as long as you stay consistent with the level of description throughout the story it can be pulled off well. I just know it would be a hassle for me to come up that much flavor text in each chapter.

    I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on May 24, 2009
    OMG IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL I CAN HARDLY SEE THROUGH THE LIGHT THAT WIPES AWAY THE DESPAIR.

    welcome back Iota and GREAT chapter. we all missed you and all i have to say is don't ever leave us again or i WILL brake your legs, tie you to a chair and make you listen to really bad polka till you either go insane or start writing again. morbid torture aside lets all drink up and celebrate!!!!!!!!!!!!!PARTY 0O0!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    pissing on and open flame while drunk as shit

    feel-good-ologist
    Doctor T
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  • From ANON - dave on May 24, 2009
    HALLELUJAH. Astonishingly good as always, but watch for spelling errors. Oh and its Roark not rorak.
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  • From ANON - David on May 22, 2009
    I knew you would come back eventually. I remember you saying that you are posting this story on other sites. I found that you haven’t posted on fanfiction.net in a while. I think some other people would like to hear from you.
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  • From ANON - Edward on May 10, 2009
    Yeah, great to see you're back. I haven't seen any updates to any of the Lucario fanfics I've been reading for quite a while, it's good to see one of my favorites come back to life.
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  • From ANON - a wandering stranger on May 10, 2009
    hello Iota is been a while, I hope you have been well. Stay and visit a while, I have been rather bored as of late.


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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on May 10, 2009
    -_-????????????
    0_0 LADIES AND GENTLEMEN START YOUR ENGINES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    HELL YEAH, HE LIVES AND WHATS MORE HES BECOME AN AUTO MACHANIC.

    A ROUND OF BEAR FOR EVER ONE.

    FEEL-GOOD-OLOGIST
    DOCTOR T
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  • From ANON - Edward on May 04, 2009
    Hooooooooonk... honk... honk... honk

    We have a pulse!
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