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By : Hilary
  • From ANON - natedog on June 18, 2013
    more more more i want to read more please
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  • From ANON - natedog on June 18, 2013
    something seems fishy about those three girls meaning the two blonds and brunette
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  • From ANON - natedog on June 18, 2013
    was'nt sakura the name of that girl that tenchi likes in tenchi in tokyo that was being controlled at one point by the female alien that wants tenchi to herself? but i guess i should read the whole thing to find out who you mean in your story but it also reminds me of the second or third tenchi movie all in all i think it's good so far.
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  • From ANON - natedog on June 18, 2013
    i keep thinking seina will go back in time to see the wedding of tenchi and the girl he's gonna marry. but then wouldn't that cause ripples in the space time continuium like washu would say
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  • From ANON - natedog on June 18, 2013
    in chapter 8 it sounds like tenchi might get amnesia at some point in the story and knowing the cartoon like i do will probably be abducted by a jealous female alien that wants tenchi for herself
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  • From ANON - darkshadowarchfiend on October 04, 2009
    I love it!!!! They are just too cute together!!! I'm glad people love Ryoko as much as I do. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From Shinzochi on September 04, 2008
    This is an AWESOME story and i'm looking VERY FORWARD to reading the next chapter. (^_^)
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  • From Shinzochi on August 26, 2008
    This is a GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! story, i'm very rager to read the next chapter
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  • From 1upmushroom on July 20, 2008
    This is a pretty good fic. I'll do this + and - style.

    ++ Tenchi/Ryoko (yes, 2 pluses)
    - Awkward dialogue, some sentences are too long and open, as if they were talking like robots that had absolutely no fear of being open. I know you're writing them as being 'older and more mature', but I think you took it too far.
    + V. Good, not perfect, but V. Good grammar, few mistakes, hard to notice
    - Ayeka's over-the-top animosity towards Ryoko, they're supposed to be friends outside of their rivalry, is this a bashing fic? Isn't that supposed to be mentioned in the fic description? I dunno. Also, I found it odd that not a single sentence was given on Ayeka's reaction to Tenchi's angry and tactless confession. Did you plan to have it in the next chapter or something?

    Final note, any plans on adding in some action to this story? Kagato's ressurection as a giant rampaging demon or somethin? I dunno.
    Hope you update
    Chiao

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