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Reviews for A Dark Night

By : PokemonPr0nPal3000
  • From uniqueindividual on March 11, 2012
    Oh man, I can't wait for the next chapter. I think it's so funny you turned potions into a controlled substance. Maybe Brock will get caught now? Hopefully that will happen as well as Ash being ok. It is bad of me to think Dawn is being a winy bitch?
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  • From ANON - seever on February 17, 2012
    Still only 5 chapters?
    Oh well. I'll keep an eye out still.
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  • From ANON - Aki on February 15, 2012
    Ok...i thought i wasn't going to like it. but with every chapter i like more and more. This last chapter i liked the best. i'll be watching and waiting to see where this goes. haha maybe paul will find some redemption here..cause i didn't like him in the series
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  • From ANON - anon on December 30, 2011
    I wanted a new chapter as a Christmas present.
    Hope you haven't forgotten about this!
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  • From ANON - Silverstars65 on December 17, 2011
    I just read all 5 chapters in one sitting, and I absolutly LOVED IT. You are such an amazing writer, and this story fits so many of my kinks. I'm looking forward to seeing what Ash's punishment is going to be next chapter... a poker scene? Another go with one of Brock's pokemon? Something else completely new and painful? Either way, I care hardly wait! Keep up the amazing work~
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  • From ANON - Jaime33 on December 15, 2011
    I love !!! Your story is...wonderful !!! I like very much ! Please, more, i want the next chapter :3
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  • From ANON - more on December 08, 2011
    MORE! you've definitely done your research. can't wait till the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Mevvyicons on November 22, 2011
    The only parts in this story that I don't really like is maybe the fact that May loves/likes Ash (or vise versa.)

    But this story... is... very good.
    Please keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - P.hormann on November 13, 2011
    Ash fucked by an onix!? How would he be able to walk ever again?

    This story is very well written and I'm enjoying the plot. I certainly hope there is more to come.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 13, 2011
    Please upload more!

    There were a few things I was confused about reading this though.. Mainly onix.
    Onix is raping other trainers without Brock now? Or does Brock still have it?
    Oh, and I see May might have a thing for Ash? Thats cute.
    But for some reason I don't want them to be together in the end.
    Aside from that... it was awesome.

    Is there a poker scene coming up next? ?I can hardly wait.
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  • From ANON - malezleader on September 08, 2011
    I can't believe it... I came onto this site today to reread this story and it has 4 new chapters!!
    Keep them coming. (no pun intended)

    I'll have to keep popping in looking for more chapters every now and then.
    Made my day.
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  • From ANON - childhood... on August 25, 2011
    THIS IS A CHILDREN'S SHOW! How did you... Ash... Brock... And Paul? Why did you.... Why... Why did I enjoy it?
    Hope the next few chapters are one their way! I'm ready for more.
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  • From ANON - anon on August 19, 2011
    This story is terrific so far! I'm astounded by how much research you put into these kinks! Most people only go by what they've heard on TV, and it shows. Keep it up~
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  • From ANON - ratngit on August 13, 2011
    Great story, hope there will be more soon. mmmLook forward to reading the next episode. Hmmm. Who will they find inside? Gary? Professor Oak?
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  • From ANON - anon on August 08, 2011
    Will this be continued? It is horribly amazing so far.
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