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Reviews for Zoro Learns Some Manners

By : Synvamp
  • From MishaGirl on September 25, 2008
    AH! I haven't reviewed the last two chapters!! We must make amends!

    They were both great!

    Poor frustrated Sanji...

    I LOVE LOVE the dressing up in the costume and totally laughed when Zoro broke his play sword.
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  • From ANON - narcissa-s on September 22, 2008
    Hehe Zoro is so hot in that disguise! I can't wait to see what happens next. :D Yay!
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  • From ANON - sabershadowkat on September 22, 2008
    I'm so glad you posted this link from onepieceyaoi on livejournal. I am enjoying this story a lot. Please keep updating a opy so I can read the next chapters!
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  • From beckysue904 on September 22, 2008
    hey! This is fantastic. I love how you portray them dancing around each other, and the sex scenes are lovely -- er... well, you know what i mean. I love the story, and am wondering if there was a way for you to notify people who want to know when you updated. It's totally fine if not, but if you could let me know if you could or couldn't, that would be great!
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  • From MishaGirl on September 18, 2008
    OMG...yes, Steamy is the perfect way to describe this chapter. Super hot s/z sex right here! I love how Sanji is using every piece of his sexual experience to make Zoro moan in pleasure!! Play the marimo like a fiddle Sanji! I love watching you work!!

    You know you should totally post a link to this story at Livejournal at the OnePieceYaoi and ZoSan communities. Your fic deserves more traffic and way more praise than just I can give!
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  • From Dragon7 on September 17, 2008
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - wlk68 on September 17, 2008
    Dayum!!!! I tend to prefer Sanji on the bottom but this was seriously hot!!! I think I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke!
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  • From MishaGirl on September 10, 2008
    Hahaha! What a great ending of this chapter! I could hear the 'sanji is cool' Music playing as he walked away from his destruction!

    You wrote the fight scene very well and by the time it was over I was right there with Sanji and Zoro with a 'Wha? No sex?' feeling.

    I look forward to seeing Zoros disguise! heh heh heh...I love dress up. Maybe Sanji can have fun stipping it off him! Or roleplaying! YEE!! FUN! I can't wait for the next chp!
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  • From MishaGirl on September 04, 2008
    WOW! I get a chapter dedicated to ME? Shucks!*kicks dirt* I really don't understand why more people aren't commenting on this story, Look at all the hits! (but then again I guess I have stories that have similar fates! Thanks for your comments by the way!)

    What an awesome chapter! (and it was dedicated to me even!) Namis violent reaction was spot on and loved how the boys have grown in their relationship to the point of really appreciating each others strengths. The training/Sparing was super hot and SO well written! I could picture the action perfectly! (Zoro almost getting lost in anticipation was super cute too! And Plan ahead Sanji always pleases!!)

    Great job again! As always I look forward to more!
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  • From MishaGirl on August 31, 2008
    *droooooooooooool*

    So very awesome. I loved that Sanji was determined to make Zoro moan and like it. Also the serious ending and cute ode to a almost dead swordsman meal were fantastic!

    WOOHOO! Another good chapter!
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  • From MishaGirl on August 28, 2008
    Oh god! Another great chapter! This one was so filled with hotness though...Sanji licking the blood off his fingers was so lurid and sexy to me...GOD! ANd then you finish the chapter off with chocolate sauce?!!

    DAMN! I LOVE YOU!!

    Keep this stuff coming!
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  • From MishaGirl on August 27, 2008
    A really great and fun read so far!! I love a teasing experienced Sanji who knows just how to push Zoros buttons! I also loved Zoros comparison of the cook to 'sex and violence'. VEry lurid! Love the style too! More soon please!
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