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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams (edited & revised)

By : Chocho
  • From juggaletteuchiha on May 11, 2010
    wow i loved it. im not bit with male pregnancy but i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Beahmont on November 24, 2008
    While the revision is going good, I think you missed a few scenes between chapter 9 and 10. Namely the rest of dinner and Shuichi with Eri the first time at his car in the parking lot.
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  • From Chikky on October 09, 2008
    Can't wait for the next chapter! I really do love your writing~
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