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Reviews for Vorovskoy Zakon

By : twopoint
  • From ANON - ariesgirl on October 14, 2009
    i'm impressed. This is incredibly well written. I can't even pick apart separate details, it's all... perfect. I really hope you post more.
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  • From ANON - a person on March 20, 2009
    God, this is so good. It's really well-written and the little details and characterization quirks are amazing (the shoes, the ring, and the crow thing in particular were great).

    Not to let this devolve into an unhelpful comment but VERY EXCELLENT PLZ WRITE MORE. Of this or anything else WK. 8)
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  • From ANON - voksen on March 19, 2009
    This was amazing! Thanks for a great read. I don't think I've seen a pre-Schwarz fic done quite like this before, and it worked really, really well. Loved the bits about Rosenkreuz mixed in, *really* loved the way you interwove other people's surface thoughts with Schuldig's point of view. I very much hope you write more, of this fic and in the fandom :)
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on February 25, 2009
    Oh wow this was good I do hope to see you!
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  • From ANON - Renee on February 21, 2009
    Wow.....that's just... wow. I loved it! I absolutly LOVED it. You captured both Schuldig and Crawford's personalities perfectly, which is really hard to dow hen you have a pain in the ass German and a calculating mysterious American. I was really surprised to see Farfarello there, but the nailed tongue was actually very much like him. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on February 21, 2009
    This was excellent. Well crafted and a wonderful read.
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  • From xDavyn on February 20, 2009
    I really, really enjoy the entire bit involving the training at Rosenkreuz. It's interesting to think of them as taking a somewhat spiritual approach to the abilities of their students, as most people write the school as a more practical school that just so happens to train people in things like telepathy rather than, say, auto mechanics. The only issue I had is the gaps in time when Schuldig arrives back at the hotel. Throughout so much of the story, you kept a deliberately slow, calculating pace that observed each moment, but those lapses in time really sort of threw me off the beat. Not that they're bad, mind you. If anything it is because the rest of the story around it is so good that I want every detail. I want to know every thing! Don't be afraid to include the erotic in any work, because it is a part of human life and deserves as much consideration as any other aspect (if not more due to its taboo nature.)

    Also, I loved the wanderings of Schuldig's mind, and his collection. The integration of Beneke was also very good for getting a feel of what his talent is like. I'm going to have to go and hunt down his works myself, now. I can't wait to read more of this! Keep up the good work.
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