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Reviews for The Nightmare

By : PhoenixWolf
  • From ANON - trayner on April 05, 2013
    EXCITED FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!! was really good :)
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  • From ANON - Lq on March 29, 2012
    Cute its been a while but next chapter? Since you already wrote it and all lol
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  • From ANON - Lq on January 26, 2012
    It's so cute, I really hope you post another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2011
    i would like to read the 2nd chapter
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  • From naturechild02 on September 18, 2011
    I like it! All sweet and innocent and just like Tohru! More, more!
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  • From ANON - Lq on June 02, 2011
    I like this story, I hope you will do a second chapter. It was good, didn't feel forced or anything.
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  • From ANON - Galacia on March 16, 2011
    I enjoyed it and would love to see what happens next! I have to admit ever since I first watched collection of the show I found I liked those two as a couple. Fortunately for my curiosity and unfortuantely for my bank account I found out the story continued even further in manga form. But I diagress the story was rather true to their characters, and Kyo having a nightmare about losing his new friend works real well. I loved it and if there is more I definately want to read it!
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  • From ANON - Chels on May 08, 2010
    Love it lol. I like that Thoru was becoming bolder. Please continue! :D
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  • From ANON - Lucy on February 17, 2010
    Ohmygosh! That was possibly the best piece of fluff I've read in awhile! Put up the second chapter RIGHT NOW!!!! pretty please?
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  • From IGotTheCrazies on February 03, 2010
    aww, sweet! the tohru babble thing is right on, just watch using he/she/him/her etc. it's hard not to overuse them but if you can find ways to cut back on it, it's an easy way to polish writing. post the new chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Suka on December 11, 2009
    I really liked this, and would like to see more. It was simple, it was sweet and that was all it needed to be. I really hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - snotofthedragon on August 22, 2009
    It was really sweet and well written. I would like to see what comes next, so please continue.
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  • From ANON - kady on August 14, 2009
    it was very good
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  • From ANON - klv__klv on July 25, 2009
    Wow! That was great. It was rather suspensefully sweet, and showed the braveness and kindness of Tohru. And I could see Kyo, half in and half out of a dream, being too displaced to react violently to her presence, especially with the wet weather. So, wow, this actually seems possible. Now what I want to happen next probably is impossible considering their characters, but, maybe... Well hell, it's fanfiction, anything can happen. Yay for 2nd Chapter!! Bookmarkation!!!!
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 24, 2009
    *snickers* That was sweet actually--I can't wait to read what you have in store for these two (hint, hint).
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