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Reviews for Payback in Full

By : Saiga123
  • From ANON - luc on August 10, 2015
    I know you have a couple on going fanfics right now that you work on but I would love to see a couple more chapters added to this story, hopefully it stays with just haruka and kentaro that would be perfect.
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  • From ANON - luc on February 20, 2015
    Really enjoy your stories, I know you have a couple good ones your still working on hut it would be awesome
    if you added a couple more chapters to finish this story.
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  • From ANON - Corruptedperv on August 31, 2014
    Like it so far, hope he turns her into a common street whore along with all of the other girls, with him having Naru gangbang right before her wedding with Keitaro.
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  • From ninesenshi on January 30, 2012
    I liked it. I'd like to see him doing something similar with most of the girls at the inn.
    SailorNemsis
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  • From RAW19 on December 03, 2009
    I think it was horrible. But, only because i'm a Haruka fan and these sort of fics rank among my least favorite. But, i read it and i'm reviewing it. I didn't notice too many typo and grammatical issues, so that's a plus. Though, I found it far too short, even for just a first chapter. Hopefully the other chapters will be a bit longer. Most authors prefer such.

    I also hope your future fics will be a bit happier in content, so i'll desire to read all of it. Good luck out there!
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  • From Perfect Purity on November 19, 2009
    Four inches wide?

    Yikes.
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