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From ANON - Arianna on July 14, 2014
omg this is the best ai no kusabi fanfic i ever read... but is incomplete... please I beg you, continue this amazing story
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From zas on April 07, 2014
That was great I hope u come back soon I want to know wat happen at the end
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From Sheleeta on July 11, 2010
And the plot thickens... hehehe. I love it when I see a blondie bottom. Since it is so out of the spectrum of what one would expect. I look forward to more. -Sheleeta
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From Sheleeta on June 23, 2010
Poor Guy, that's so f'd up what happened to him. But it makes sense why he's so jittery. And I have to go awwww.... to Riki and Iason, so cute. I look forward to the next chapter, as always. Until next time. Sheleeta
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From Sheleeta on June 14, 2010
Yay! Update! Congratulations on everything you've accomplished. Glad to hear about it. So, now Riki is going to have a little pet of his own eh? Hehe... I can imagine how that kid could be used. Looking forward to when you can update again.
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on June 13, 2010
Oh poor Katze, Iason is going to kill his ass *tearing eyes*. He should have just let Raoul kill him because Iason is an inflexible bastard when it comes to obeying him *nose starting run*. When he gets a hold of Katze and finds out about the conversation he had with Raoul there will need to be a new fic written call "Taming Katze, the Blondie's Wrath" *oops that did it WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! sniffles and cries some more*. But I was just thinking what if Iason isn't the one who finds out first *DU-DU-DUUUUUNNNNNNNN*. Katze could be in a whole new world of trouble, I don't see the "Assassinate Iason" group being easy on him at all *bites nails*. Then that would put Iason & Riki in danger *YAY FOR COLLECTING A FIREY LITTLE PET (he rushes in singing "Here I come to save the Mongrel "*. I can't wait to whats gonna happen next to him.

Now lets talk about Raoul & Guy. I know that you had a reason for the small exchange between them and I believe that is to have Guy get uncontrollably jealous. That scene could lead to 1 Blondie doing whatever he can to make it up to 1 Mongrel *smirks voyeuristicly*.

On to Riki & Iason. Even now Riki is in denial of his feelings for Iason. He is such a self masochist. It is a bit out of character for Iason to be so patient. It is quite lovely to see Iason thinking like Riki does and for him to he confused. I really hope his confusion leads to Iason being topped first to prove how much he loves
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From Mitsuhon on May 17, 2010
Thanks for the chapter! :)

What I really liked, was the end of this chapter, Iason's and Riki's interaction. You managed to show Iason's tender and considerate side, and although it's maybe not characteristically Iason's nature, it's nicely refreshing point of view.

And it's nice that Iason's and Riki's (future) relationship has time to develop.
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From Sheleeta on May 16, 2010
Poor Riki, always gets so confused because of Iason. But that is just his lot in life. Nothing he can do about it.
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on May 15, 2010
YAY!!!!!
Iason actually confessing his feelings to Riki (so UN-Iason like). I am so feeling the live with Katze thing, although I'm not sure that will be such a great idea (especially when Iason finds out that Katze & Riki know each other). We both know that Iason is jealous and having someone know "his Riki" better than him will cause a ton of trouble for all involved. If Katze thought his world was over at the end of the call he will be sure of it when Iason shows up with Riki in tow. As for Riki we know he is never honest about his feelings so for him to admit that he's feeling Iason will rock all of Eos. But when he admits it Riki will be feeling the sweet pain that only Iason can give and I am dying to see it happen. As always I loved your chapter and I look forward to the next one, so until then I will end this review with a Yaoi-Fan-Girl scream.

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! So hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! {^.^}
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 05, 2010
As always I loved this chapter. Yes, I will agree; Raoul & Guy truly have issues (I think we should get Raoul some Prozac & Guy some Ex, maybe some drugs can fic their sex life issues LMAO *laughing evilly*). Better yet how about the sexually repressed Raoul be topped (I bet that would be quite interesting *blushing profusely*). Ooo Ooo I know how about 69'n them I bet that would be an experience since Guy is up for teaching him new things. (^o^)

Back to Iason & Riki; are they going to have some searingly painful sex (you know giving that they were both damn near burned to a crisp). I know I have a bit of an S&M side, but so do my favorite lovers, it would be so fitting for them to pair as Riki is trying to so soothe the Blondie's ailments (however reluctant he pretends to be I should say). We all know that Iason is dying to sample that lithe body and Riki has am EXTREMELY sexually charged body and he hasn't gotten any in this story (I'm kinda feelin' sorry for him ).

Are you going to reveal the plans of the Blondie with dreads and who sent him out to hurt Iason? By any chance was Jupiter behind that day in Ceres? Will Katze be meeting with Raoul and pick up on his lust for Guy? And will Katze be the one to find Iason & Riki, knowing his dealing in the black market *finding them by accident would be so awesome*.

I am totally loving the "Princess" name calling of the most powerful Blondie around. It absolute karma because he has yet to mongrel down . I am ssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter Ethereal (Biting my pretty nails to nothingness and pacing the floors trying to wait patiently for the next chapter).

Until next time {*.*}
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From Mitsuhon on April 05, 2010
Thanks for the chapter! (and the previous chapter as well)

Your spelling has improved ways! I'm sorry I'm bringing it up again, but it does affect on reader's reading pleasure.

I'm not quite sure why, but I thought this was your best chapter so far.
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From Sheleeta on April 05, 2010
Poor Guy. But I do agree that Jupiter has a reason why she made the elite in general forbidden to copulate. Loss of control is one theme I could think of, but in my little rp with my friend, we also think that in the manufacturing process she used on the elite, part of their soul was separated and usually they will find their other soul, and she is afraid of them finding that, because most of the time it is with a mongrel, and the intimate act is enough to make them rethink the order and propaganda that she knows. That is just an additional idea. I look forward to the next chapter, sorry to hear about your tooth. But at least this time you were nice and didn't leave me a cliffie. :)
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From Sheleeta on March 25, 2010
Another very nice chapter, though once more you ended it in a cliffie, but you apologized for it, so it's forgivable. Good luck on your studies and looking forward. Just curious as to how Iason is going to fight with Riki hindering him. Evil, I must say.

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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 23, 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!

Raoul & Guy, totally delicious visual *Nose bleeding so much that I have to invest in Scott tissue*.
Raoul a VIRGIN (no way he's always nearly RAPING Iason), what a total turn of events. Now all we need is for Guy to penetrate him, to take his virginity completely, then I can die in peace. I can't wait to see what will happen "in the morning"! {*v*}

Iason & Riki, back together sooner than I though *big sighs of relief and grinning from ear to ear*.
But for them to be chained together in a fight is also quit a turn in events. Now Iason will get to see what the sexy "Riki the Dark" can do. Knowing how you like to throw in some great switches, I bet Riki will end up save Iason in this fight. We both know that in truth Riki is as possessive of the Blondie as HE is Riki. Oh Lord this next chapter is going to be great.

BTW
Will there be celebratory sex between Riki and Iason? Is Iason also a virgin? And will Riki get to mount the great Blond (now brunette) Stallion first ?
I look forward to the answers in the coming chapters.

Thanks for another awesome chapter, til next time.
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 14, 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am loving the Raoul/Guy pairing opportunity. Although it would have been great if they continued, but the heated flirting is getting so good. Iason & Riki.....separated.....pain in my chest.....heart-ache.....tears running down my face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't make these two face off in the ring! I can't even bear to imagine it......WWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA............sobs heavily.........soul...leaving...body.....I'm totally deflated now.
LOL
I loved the chapter and the story itself. {*.*}
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