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By : ethereal
  • From Mitsuhon on March 14, 2010
    Thanks for the new chapter! I've been meaning to say something for some time, but it has been postponed since I never remember how to log in on my account...

    Anyway, I started reading this fic and although it has many mistakes (which you already are aware of), it still managed to capture my interest. The spelling mistakes are quite a shame, because they sometimes make parts of this story rather comical - without it being the intention. At the same time, it puzzles me a bit. How can spelling present such a problem to you when overall your writing is good?

    Well, I didn't intent to nag about spelling or grammar or any technical aspects, my point was to tell that you do seem to have a gift for story-telling. So thank you for this fic, I hope you have time and will to continue it.

    (And in this chapter - at least I hope I'm reviewing ch 8... - Raoul and Guy were so sweet :)
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  • From Sheleeta on March 12, 2010
    Another good chapter, though I must complain that it was a little shorter than your other ones. And yes, you are evil leaving the cliffies... I give you the poke of doom. So, we're going to see one of my favorite pairings now? Yea! Anyways, continue working hard on your studies. Sheleeta
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  • From Sheleeta on March 04, 2010
    Agh! A cliffie! Evil evil evil. I can imagine how Iason looks, you did a good job on the description. Good luck in your studies and I look forward to the next installment. Until then. Take care.
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  • From Sheleeta on February 25, 2010
    Nice nice, at least Raoul finally has Guy's name but we'll see how long he'll use it. I didn't find as many spelling errors in this chapter as the previous ones, so it seems you are getting better with that. :) As always, I look forward to the next chapter. Sheleeta
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  • From ankfanforever on February 17, 2010
    This made me smile. I like Raoul more and more. I bet Guy doesn't know what exactly is ahead, but I guess he will finally decide to play along a little and find out more info from the Blondie. While this is exactly what Raoul seeks to achieve from the mongrel, this can really turn into a complicated game. But I loved the part with the pillow. I can just imagine Raoul's expression, absolutely priceless! And, clearly, sensuality is there, but humor, too. "color coordinated with the room" ... if that was the only thing. I already suspect Raoul is keeping Guy in as some sort of a pet, as straightlaced as he is, he must have found a formal way to keep a mongrel in his quarters without any headache. And what was with those papers?

    Yes, yes, pretty Iason is getting pretty jealous over a mongrel he pretends to not care about. Also, things tend to get a little on the dangerous side with both of them. Riki is hot headed, and Iason is kind of, too, so I guess they're quite a match.

    Keep it going, I cannot wait to read what's next.
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  • From Sheleeta on February 14, 2010
    Another enjoyable chapter. I liked how you showed some humor in Raoul. Too many people write him and Guy off. And I'm looking forward to seeing how Iason reacts to getting his hair dyed, that's going to be hilarious.
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  • From ankfanforever on February 05, 2010
    Interesting story, now that pieces begin to fall together ... I did not know how much you are into continuing your story, so I just expected to see how things evolve, before posting a comment.

    I like it so far, with Riki being Riki, yet still generous and good natured, with Iason, a little softer than what we know from the books (but I like him like that), with Raoul, bent of solving things, especially since this is about his best friend, with Guy, a true representative of Mongrels, with no trust in Blondies whatsoever.

    I may be part of a small majority, but I love reading fics including the Raoul/Guy pairing. I would love to see how Raoul wins Guy's trust (and hopefully, falls for him in the process), but you don't have to listen to me, since it's your story. (I loved 'Wasteland', as well.) I cannot help but notice that Guy already thinks Raoul to be beautiful, that's a good sign.

    On the other hand, we have Iason and Riki, brought together by circumstances, and many things may happen in cramped places. :)

    That weird Blondie, from Raoul's workplace ... maybe he has something to do with Iason's misfortune? He is way too suspicious.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Sheleeta on February 05, 2010
    Nice, poor Guy. I personally like Guy, though he did flip; I think he's a bit misunderstood. Look forward to the next installment.
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  • From Sheleeta on January 29, 2010
    It is going along nicely, though I am noticing some spelling errors, but nothing that I can't get past. I look forward to your next installment. Good luck in your classes.
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  • From KatzeRaoul on January 29, 2010
    C'mon Riki, Iason isn't a bad guy once you get to know him. And 'sides I don't know what all the fuss is about, I for one would have LOVED to wake up in Iasons lap!!*grins* He's so SMEXY!! Now do what you were going to do in the first place and help Iason, I mean put it this way he will owe you BIG time for this.*grins* Now when it comes to Guy, I really don't care WHAT happens to him, 'cause I HATE his ass!!*frowns* So Raoul torture him all you want.*huffs*
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  • From Sheleeta on January 18, 2010
    I enjoy your concept, it is really unique. And the quick update is much appreciated. I look forward to the next chapter.
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