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Reviews for An Offer He Can't Refuse...

By : IGotTheCrazies
  • From ANON - Xim-Chan on August 08, 2016

    I  think this is like the 3rd time I've read your story.. I I love it every time!


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  • From ANON - mmmflarfle on February 01, 2016
    Lovely story!!! keep them coming :}
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  • From rogueMeiko on June 30, 2014
    So far it's very gripping! I am enjoying it a lot and would love to see more! Please continue!
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  • From IlDolceSuono on September 06, 2011
    At first I was turned off by the big chunky paragraphs. There are some grammatical errors as well, but you have a good understanding of their relationship. It's a little vanilla for my taste, and the back-and-forth POV isn't my style, but I read the whole thing regardless.

    This last chapter was just enough. Nice.
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  • From GlassesandWhatnot on March 21, 2011
    Was that the end? it's been about a year since you've updated do I get to see the end if this isn't it? Great story btw, keep writing!
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  • From LittleMissMuddle on August 25, 2010
    I have to admit that I cautiously read the first chapter...and immediately demolished the rest. :)

    I'm very picky about fanfics, I just can't stand when people bend and twist characters to fit in with their idea of a romance - and you have done no such thing. Rather than changing Fuu or Mugen you've added more depth than the Anime portrayed. (At first I was sceptical about the possibility of Mugen smiling and imagining a bright and fluffy future-he just doesn't seem like THAT kind of guy-but I soon found myself enjoying the possibility that yes, his character could be capable of some real bouts of emotion.)

    The plot is brilliant, Takara is my new idol, I can finally stand the idea of Fuugen, & I can't wait until you write more!

    Honestly, I thought chapter 6 *was* the ending haha.

    Oh! I suppose I should add that in the chapter where Mugen gives Takara to Fuu (I read it so fast I don't remember which chapter it was ^^;) there was one spelling mistake that stuck out at me like a sore thumb. You wrote that she kissed him on the 'check' instead of the 'cheek'...apart from that, my only other "complaint" is my lack of education in Japanese culture. I had nooo idea what a engawa was. Haha, and the only reason I remembered it is because 'engawa' is still open in another window after I Google'd it. ;D

    Powpow! Keep up the awesome work, Anna!
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  • From brainfear on June 30, 2010
    So good! I wish the smut was longer though!

    ch6
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  • From LdyMoon on March 07, 2010
    Ok, so I read chapters 1-5 straight and...I'm wanting more. So tell me, is this a story that your going to continue writing? I hope so, cause I'd really like to finish reading it! Oh, and I thought the same thing with that crazy one eyed patch guy and his creepy brothers. So, I'm glad to have met someone who thought the same thing I did. :)
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  • From IGotTheCrazies on February 08, 2010
    I've tried to figure out how to do italics, but I couldn't figure out what to do. It's really annoying because there are a LOT of things I would put in them... if you know how I would REALLY appreciate it!!!
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  • From MissB on February 05, 2010
    Yeah it was short, but something important did happen so it was a productive chapter. I also meant to tell you that in the previous chapter, you may want to consider putting Fuu's rape flashbacks in italics or something, just so we know they are flashbacks, ya know. I remember I had to read that part a couple times before I understood what was happening. Just a suggestion.

    -B
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  • From RogueMichelle on February 05, 2010
    haha yea that for a title would also be a bit misleading. hehe but it would have worked. Anyway another good chapter im glad to see you're a regular updater :] Keep up the great work.
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  • From MissB on February 02, 2010
    Alright got a shout out! :) That was a good chapter. Poor Mugen. Can't wait for more.
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  • From RogueMichelle on February 02, 2010
    Love it so far, just found it last night actually surprised at my luck of when i sign on this morning to finish it there was a new chapter :] very great. I can probably imagine Mugen... naked... being attacked by a cat like that great comedy. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From MissB on February 01, 2010
    This is pretty good. I'd like to continue reading this.

    As far as the guy raping Fuu. I'd never saw it that way but its possible and definatly adds something to your story. I had always thought that he just groped her or something.
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  • From IGotTheCrazies on January 29, 2010
    sorry! i didn't mean to deleate your reveiw, coffee girl? was that your name? i clicked the wrong button... yeah, you're right, i'll try to edit it but i'm not sure how, thank you so much for the review, though! my first review and i accidentally delete it... ugh...
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