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Reviews for Ficlet Series (ES21)

By : crunchysalad
  • From ANON - Hoshi on February 07, 2011
    (*sighs contentedly) This BanbaHarao has to be my favourite of all....

    Can I even properly articulate on how romantic it is? The soft feeling that permeates this fic; the gentle, smooth and natural flow...what makes it even more perfect is how you fit the canon into it. To me, their game against the Hakushu Dinosaurs has the most BanbaxHarao moments there are; so nothing can be more perfect that you'd use them. :D Yes; the angst, atmosphere and resolution in here is handled just right!

    I also liked your description of Harao's built in relation to the football very much. It's an interesting perspective; and one that reminds us Harao is no petite wisp of an underdeveloped guy even with respect to his team. And the note of hope in the end was the best!

    Hoping to see more Eyeshield from you! (*love)
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  • From ANON - Crowstar on February 07, 2011
    Oooh; this one was really cute too! XD

    Harao is being (*sexysexysexyOMIGODloincloth O________O *nosebleeds) and bratty as ever; but it never does detract from the romance....as seen seeping through the simple fic that's worth more than its weight.

    Poor Banba! He always seems to get the short shrift, doesn't he? (But then he's the only one patient enough to handle his [queen :P] for long; and it just makes them an old married couple all the more.)

    Loved those tender gestures from both!
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  • From ANON - Crowstar on February 07, 2011
    OHMY- (*squeals)

    "... and letting thou taste of one's succulent lips, and touch sacred places never before explored..."

    And the stuff after that... (*blushes) Oooh; who thought archaic language with all its euphemisms could sound so graphic and kinky?! (In front of everyone too! Bad Harao! XDDDD)

    That was some really cute and plausible BanbaHarao! And just when there's not a lot of this pairing too.... (*sighs) Well; you just made my day! ^^
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