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Reviews for Unexpected Conflagration

By : Manifest Destiny
  • From rdobetTev on April 10, 2011
    Damn, Why'd you have to make this so short. I loved this story. XD
    also I pretty much made Umari although it's not really legitimate cause of Flare Blitz XD
    I can give you her if you want XD.
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  • From StevieRayStrong on August 23, 2010
    Quite a ride, I had rather grim satisfaction at Umari contemplating burning down the house in response to Allan's behavior, but that still would have been bad, even if he had indeed hated her instead of loving. The mega arguments in Chapter 2 were interesting to read, and the general angst in 1 was depressing as it should be. This will be a neat meet in The Dark Type, so good luck with that coming. +++++
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2010
    This story is AMAZING and very well-written! I love Umari, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Psy on July 19, 2010
    This makes me want more dark type.

    quotes as
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  • From ANON - darkenite on July 09, 2010
    your writing stiyel seems to be difernt in this story but that is to be expeted in a shorter story over all its a good story so far and im looking forward to the rest of it


    (im sory for any and all speling errs im bad a speling very bad sory)
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  • From on July 09, 2010
    Somebody's getting a shot at the Solon.

    I'd like to see more. You are aware, though, that Ch. 29 of Equilibrium takes place on about July 28?
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