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Reviews for Misty's Capture

By : Omalley99
  • From ANON - mrbob on April 20, 2014
    love that grimer! you should write a scene where she gets dp'ed by it.
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  • From fantome1 on October 02, 2011
    Brilliant, as always.

    When she does break sexually, I hope they have a more equal relationship outside of the bedroom.

    Also, this is just a request, I hope he gets her pregnant in the ending. I'd like it to be that she realises that he is her true love. Still his sex slave, but that they truly love each other.

    Anyway. Awesome stuff.

    I like that your saving Omalley's first time with her for when she is truly his.
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  • From Phoenix727 on October 01, 2011
    Interesting story.

    Couple of questions:

    1. Have we seen the last of Lady Cloud, Cheryl of the big tits, Ash and Brock?

    2. Is this the last we've seen of Ash and Brock trying to save her?
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  • From fantome1 on September 06, 2011
    Fantastic fic, truly.

    Now that Omalley has seen of Ash and Brock, and Misty is on the verge of breaking, will he take her himself to finish her transformation? (Makes sense, and would be hot). This new girl sounds interesting too, he could have his own harem (yay for threesomes, and the potential for yuri-only scenes as well).

    Brilliant stuff.
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  • From animekid on September 05, 2011
    This story is interesting.

    The only gripe is the long paragraphs ._. It hurts me eyes.

    But I hope to see more kink and Misty caving in and begging with love...eventually.

    Keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - theunknown on March 25, 2011
    ok. maybe i'm just a soppy little shit. but i don't think i'd like this nearly as much if it ended with Omalley winning. nothing on you personally dude.
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