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Reviews for Tresspasser

By : Omalley99
  • From johnjordan on September 04, 2011
    Pretty good heres a story and piic for you to enjoy

    http://doomedfool.deviantart.com/art/Black-Lily-Sharpedo-133655961

    http://rosvo.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=216#/d27lmzx
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  • From ANON - chm01 on November 22, 2010
    not bad, but you need to separate the pharagraphs and the conversations.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2010
    Wall of text much? :P

    Use the Enter/Return key twice at the end of every paragraph (or once on Vista). Or you could make the width of the paragraphs less and use Tab at the beginning of each paragraph, but that is too much work ;)

    But other than that it was an alright chapter (1). :)
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