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Reviews for Overheated Ctarl

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From DaPoet on September 22, 2013
    http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/19919 Outlaw Star: Growing Pains

    For the last 3 years I re-read this story every 6-9 months. I just found out today about the authors passing. I am happy to know that one of my reviews (under a different name: dapoet) he enjoyed. I've been meaning to post the old story he based part of this one for a while now. But I'm saddened that he didn't see it. RIP good friend and write more in heaven I would love to see what you can come up with.
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  • From DaPoet on September 22, 2013
    DAMN!!! I WANT MORE!!! Base on the adivise of a friend I came this website and thus far have only read this story, but if this story is any indication of how good the rest is I may become a 1.5'er and never enter the real world again. Thanks. I REPEAT I WANT MORE!!!!

    With luv,

    Da poet
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2013
    Pretty good. Could have used a bit more detail, (did the blond guy ever get a name?) And wow, so many spelling errors, but overall quite enjoyable: B+
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  • From ANON - Tenchi's_Wife on January 12, 2013
    absolutely loved this story! ^.^ just wanted to say that. also, curious. does Jim become a father? and does Gene ever become one as well?
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  • From ANON - Found You! on September 19, 2012
    Yes! I had a craving to read this story recently but it was no longer on FF.net and I was afraid I would never get to see it again! Heh, time to enjoy this story again. And so this wasn't a complete waste of your time to read, I feel I should point out that the only problem I have with this story is that all of your OCs are nameless. Even though you took some of them from other places I feel you should still at least give them A name. It would help the story flow better I think.
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  • From shadowblade65 on January 04, 2012
    Excellent just finished reading it and its great are all your stories this adventurous if so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - DaPoet on October 02, 2011
    DAMN!!! I WANT MORE!!! Base on the adivise of a friend I came this website and thus far have only read this story, but if this story is any indication of how good the rest is I may become a 1.5'er and never enter the real world again. Thanks. I REPEAT I WANT MORE!!!!

    With luv,

    Da poet
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on May 08, 2011
    A pirate hangar you say? *Eyes light up*

    Sorry for not reviewing for a while, I just didn't want to spam you with comments that were pretty much identical in their praising of your epicness!

    Also, soooooooooooooooooooo many kinks could come out of this! I don't know what you find appealing, but im going to suggest bondage gear, because bondage is awesome. Also, Aisha in a collar (And not much else ;) ) pushes all the right buttons for me. Also, the sheer volume of jokes that could be made has some appeal.

    However if this was less a kink request and more of a plot thing, I'd like to see a stash of something the humans consider useful, but the Ctarls see as heinous, just to ratchet up the tension between the alliances. An example might be (CLICHE WARNING TO THE MAX) Cat nip.
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  • From ANON - Rez on April 21, 2011
    Thanks for this story. But it is really in need to be proofreaded. There are mistakes like "Terrans and humans on the same ship?" and too many typos.
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on April 21, 2011
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so sad :,(

    The scene was so well written! I love it, yet hate it! Give Aisha a hug for me!

    As always, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Shard01 on April 16, 2011
    Thanks for more of the good stuff. Oh and if your still looking for it you can find Outlaw Star: Growing Pains on mediaminor.org
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on April 16, 2011
    Another amazing chapter here! Thanks for the little (Well, I say little :P) mention of my second favourite pairing in Outlaw Star (to JimxAisha, of course!).

    I love how protective Jim is, it's so cute!

    Sorry the review is short, writing from phone!

    Just letting you know that you MMD!
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on April 15, 2011
    He's becoming terratorial? Thats a mix between cute, sexy and awesome I cant describe! Even though it does make me worry a bit, as Aisha would be a very... desirable mate, and whilst Jim is clever, I doubt his abillity to take out a Ctarl in hand-to-hand! Though, of course, love makes you strong!

    The combat was nice, and very realistic (from what I know about naval combat, which admittedly is little), and the death of the general was actually pretty touching. I also look forward to seeing more of Inuyasha, as he seems to be developing pretty damn fast!

    Also, despite this being a very Jim x Aisha fic, I love the little bits of Gene x Melfina and Suzuka, as they are so nice together! I'd love to see like a one-shot of them or something. Someone get on that! (R34 and all that :P)

    Also, the way it ended, with Jim and Aisha sleeping toether, just rounded off this whole chapter for me, it was so cute!

    As always, keep up the great work, and thanks for updating so damn fast!

    P.s; Not sure exactly how much of the cat pysiology maps onto Ctarls, but if you rub the base of a cats tail (The underside), its arousing!

    ...What? I used to be a Vet! You these kind of things! Never thought it'd actually be useful though! XD
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on April 14, 2011
    Mmmmmm, another great chapter here! Loving the mix of sexy and funny, you got it just right here! I must say that the "Hi Mom" scene, even in my imagination, had me trying to contain my laughter! I also gotta say, having a complex guy like Jim reduced to his more base instincts is a great read, It just emphasises how damn good that sex is!

    Also, yay, a war is hell plot! I missed those plots, people seem to be going back to a "War for Fun and Profit" Stance on warfare, which, any grunt or officer will tell you, just aint true.

    Glad to see that you find my reviews entertaining! Not sure hy youd find them entertaining, seeing as you write such delicious lemon!

    Anywhoosle, I look forward to seeing your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Igobymanynames on April 12, 2011
    Hehehe, don't mention it, after all, you desrve to hear the truth!

    But anywhoosle, I must say you had me worried for a second there, with the mention of sexual torture.

    First of all, because, whilst I'm into bondage, rape (and torture) is bad shit, and it shouldn't be sexualised! However, the fact that the other characters seemed to think this was a horrific thing stopped me from ranting for a bit. However, if you are planning to do a rape scene, put a disclaimer on it, or you will be ranted at mercilessly! Trust me, I've been there!

    Right, onwards and upwards! Aisha! In the Terran uniform?! *Pants*

    God that's a sexy mental image!

    Also, the bow legged walk and Genes snarkiness made me chuckle a bit, so props for that!

    My only little sad point was that this chapter was a little short, but hey, good thing come in little packages! :D

    I'll stroke any part of you, ego included, as long as you keep this updated, deal?

    Teehee, look forward to more plot, more sex, more hot costumes, and more fun times! Keep up the good work!
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