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Reviews for Determination

By : kre8tive
  • From ANON - SP777 on July 29, 2011
    about #10...

    Whooaaa!!! O_O

    Now, that was a chapter worth praise! :-)
    You definitely upped the ante on this one, I really
    liked the direction you went AND the ninjas are a
    nice touch as well.

    I can tell u were inspired by something to write
    it like this. :-)
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  • From axlyles on June 16, 2011
    Great story. You can really hear the dramatic musical background. (DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From SParker on May 29, 2011
    about #8...

    Yes, indeed...this is definitely picking
    up on the suspense AND you took an unexpected
    turn in your storytelling, which is always good.

    Always keep your readers guessing. :-)
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  • From ANON - KP on May 27, 2011
    This is a awesome story. R u gonna make another several chapters?
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  • From snowlynx on February 12, 2011
    I love it! More more MORE!

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