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Reviews for What\'s Your Favorite?

By : LadyMoonStone
  • From JOler on June 15, 2011
    On knees begging for more ... With Goku casually and innocently bringing up the 'position' question again and also one about foreplay ... And seeing the same conversation between Kougaiji's group with Lirin being a spoiled brat and refusing to go bed (and sneaking back to hear the question ) when the second question comes up ~ then getting caught when she chimes in with her answer after the others have answered ... Then while they are still in mortified shock she can toss out the foreplay question ... I soooooo want to see everyone's reaction to Goku and Lirin in their respective groups ... Seeing them all Trapped together in some way and the prior conversations coming to mind ~ and the unexpected responses from the youngest members of each team could lead to all the adults being especially mindful of those two and any interactions they seem to try to have ...
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  • From JOler on June 13, 2011
    Please continue this ... With Son Goku having sort-of heard (or re-asking) the last question, then throwing in HIS answer when everyone goes into momentary shock (he can refuse to say who, when, and where as well as how many times ~ unless the others want to answer too). Would also love to see Kougaiji and his crew announce their arrival by having Lirin happily call out her answer as sne bounds onto Sanzo's shoulders to watch the others go at it (could you see Kou and companies momentary choke then the scene afterwards...)

    Please please please ...
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  • From TangoKilo421 on June 12, 2011
    Good story. You've kept us in suspense with your Status messages on the forum, and I couldn't resist checking this out.
    I like that everyone's definitely in-character. The dialog seemed like a perfect matches for their voices. I would have pegged Hakkai for the missionary position, though.
    Keep 'em coming. You're a lot better than you give yourself credit for.

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  • From JayDee on June 12, 2011
    They're clean living types who've drunk all the liquor? That is my kind of town!

    I don't know the characters at all, but the back and forth dialogue flowed pretty well. Seemed quite a cunning hidden insult, too, when he says "Pussy" because it comes across like instead of just giving his favourite body part he's also contemptuous of the eyes and hip fans and he's calling a name as a result. Possibly I am reading too much into this, though, as a result of the wide range of slang terms for female genitalia that are also used insultingly.

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  • From JOler on June 11, 2011
    Hmm ... Also kind of wonder how various individuals would react if at least one member of each group admitted to being bi ... And asked similar questions about the other side of the coin ... Or perhaps about favorite fantasies or what they like their partner to do most ...
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  • From JOler on June 11, 2011
    Cute little convo. Kinda wish Goku would have been listening to the last question and called out an answer ... Just to see the shocked reaction of the others. Hmmm ... Wonder how the convo would go in two other situations ... Between Kougaiji's group (with Lirin calling out her answer after being sent to bed before the Position question (so would love to see Kougaiji's reaction to his little sister being able to come up with an answer ... And maybe tossing out a question of her own ... Perhaps about foreplay ... Then seeing the gasps and eeeeps that would occur ~ same if Goku called out the same question from his room). The last scenario would be ... Get both groups trapped together but in a situation where the fighting was nullified (in a cave or something with no weapons available and 'magic' or 'mystic' powers are severly dampened somehow) ... Then get both groups answers and resulting conversations ~ could so see Goku and Lirin sneaking off somehow and the grownups all freaking). (Could kind of see the Merciful Goddess setting up that scenario just to see the resulting chaos).
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