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Reviews for The Club

By : ShinjiHiroku
  • From cheeses_crust on May 16, 2017

    YOU DONT OWN ME!!!! died so hard

     

    Great work, plz continue, include gardevior next :3


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  • From Lucky_Logician on July 07, 2015
    Very nice story. Would love to read more of it.
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  • From ExponentialD on January 23, 2014
    Not bad, not bad at all. I'd work on breaking up the paragraphs a bit. Some parts run on and on, and then it's a bunch of single sentence parts where people speak. Which is fine, but just needs to be broken up properly. :3 I still voted 5/5, since it's got potential. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Frank on October 27, 2013
    This was a beautiful unexpected fanfic. I am a bit saddened that it hasn't been updated in a while, as I would love to see more about this Pokemon Club and the concept.
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  • From ANON - teyenmu on October 08, 2012
    Ur story gives a whole new meaning to Pokemon, human relations. I find it both vivid and a wonderful read, i'm not much for this type of thing but i found myself wanting to read on. I thank u for this amazing story it is a work of art, and hope u and more chapters to it.
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  • From pokemorphking on December 07, 2011
    Epic story i realy look forwerd to the next chapter!Man this fic is Good i cant wate! ^_^!
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  • From Cyborgfranky on November 14, 2011
    you good sir have talent as a writer and if you wanted to im sure you can if you have not already write novels like this and have best sellers on your hands your story is in a word riveting i found myself unable to put it down please continue and if u have more i want a copy please e-mail me
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From Corsair420 on July 27, 2011
    wow this is an awesome story, I seriously can't wait to see what happens next and I hope whatever it is, is soon. I don't know if your up for requests or not but let us know
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain the required elements. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specific fandom (not just the characters) and state in some fashion clearly that you make no money/profit.


    You must disclaim the actual fandom by NAME, not the owner/s of the fandom

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    Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.



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  • From CyberDark on July 26, 2011
    Quite an excellent story thus far. I must say, I like your adding in meaningful context to a story rather than just smut, while also including quite good smut. I'm intrigued to see how the story will unfold. If I might have one piece of constructive criticism, I might suggest you try and find another way to divide thought text from spoken text. I spent about five minutes puzzling out the opening before I realized what it was supposed to be. Perhaps that's just me being stupid, but it might help with the story understanding
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