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By : Shinoga
  • From TaintedSensibly on April 10, 2016
    This was great! Very natural and emotional. The details were just right. Very sexy. Will you write the scene where it's Ren bottoming? Please? :P
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  • From DarleneVile on January 14, 2013
    This fanfic is pure Yaoi goodness. I'm a bit obsessed with this story, I admit. For the past week, I've read and reread it on my nook about 3-4 times a day. Unlike other stories that simply state whats happening, this writer describes every physical act in great detail, with lots of inner dialogue and explicit euphemisms. So many stories quickly gloss over the best parts, with lame statements like 'with a thrust of his manhood, their bodies became one'. Its bland and boring. This author, however, describes in fantastic detail the enthusiastic, but awkwardly inexperienced lining up of their body parts, the first wonderful moment of penetration, Mihashi's considerately restrained ascent centimeter by centimeter into Abe's ass, all played out in the kind of thorough detail that makes it feel so real.
    FAVORITE PART: when Mihashi cums inside Abe, then unexpectedly flips him over, shoves his fingers inside him, and sucks him off till he cums in Mihashi's mouth, which he unflinchingly swallows down. Really amazing. Thank you Shinoga, please write more!
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  • From ANON - ij3i on March 31, 2012
    This was awesome. Both Abe and Mihashi were well in character and most importantly, it was HOT! Several points really made me giggle, especially the last part. Mihashi can be so cute and funny sometimes without even trying, and you included just enough of those moments. The only complaint comes with the writing itself. There were a number of grammatical errors. You kept switching tenses, especially in the beginning. Watch out for those types of things in the future. Happy writing! ^_^!
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