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Reviews for Our Beginning

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  • From naturechild02 on May 22, 2013
    Can't wait for more! Love this story!
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  • From naturechild02 on December 30, 2012
    Yay! So glad that they are back together and finally admitting their true feelings to each other. I love that little glimpse into Tsume's past to explain why he is afraid to feel. Nice! Keep it coming!
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  • From Midnight-Rapture on September 19, 2012
    I just want to say, "I LOVE WOLFS RAIN!!!" Thank you so much for writing a continuation!!! Your story has been very moving, and I just can't get enough of it! Please upload soon! Oh and I was thinking for the chapter "Goodbye" The remake song, "What Hurts The Most" by Cascade fits it perfectly! Oh and the chapter were Tsume is thinking of Tobe while on the run, I forget what it was called, all I could hear in my head was, "All I Need" by Within Temptation. And, I love music and how it fits with certain stories, When Tobe was being "raped" by Tsume the song "What Have You Done Now" Also by Within Temptation!
    Please keep writing because I can't wait to read more! Thanks for being outside of the box as well!!!! Oh and the scene when Tobe says he is leaving, "Always Be My Baby" by Mariha Carey! I always misspell her name! ^_^
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  • From naturechild02 on August 27, 2012
    Oh wow! I just love a suspenseful ending to a chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From naturechild02 on August 22, 2012
    Yay! New chapter! I'm so happy that they found each other again. Stay together this time, dammitt!
    I follow you on deviantART too (naturechild02)and the art goes so well with the story. Keep em both coming!
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  • From Cwbs on July 09, 2012
    Please the uncut would be much better
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  • From Cwbs on July 09, 2012
    I'm a huge wolfs rain fan, I love that some one is going to start it agian. It was a great start but I'm a little confused as to who gran is and to why toboy thinks he's a boy. I'm going to keep reading , but keep in midw it's been a while sine wolf rain fans have seen an episode so make sure to explane who any of the old charicters are just to Remind the fans of who the are. Pleases and thank you , and great start
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on July 05, 2012
    wow, totally did not see the no humans part coming. Awesome story so far though. I hope you continue writing it. I'll continue reading. ^_^
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  • From naturechild02 on June 29, 2012
    The hopping back and forth in time is fun and keeps the story interesting. I'm glad that Toboe has found a pack to hang with. He may grow up a bit with them but I hope that eventually he will get back on the road to paradise. And hopefully, Tsume is somewhere down that road.
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  • From mykonosparadise on June 11, 2012
    So Tsume is setting off for a journey of his own now too, haha.

    I didn't even have much time to comment, but I just had to drop by to say that I absolutely loved that comparison of Toboe to a peach - truly beautiful, even Emerson himself would have applauded you. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From mykonosparadise on May 26, 2012
    oh, the cliffhangerrrrrr! the tension is killing me... I wonder what's going on with Tsume... So many questions! Can't wait for the next chapter - keep up the awesome work!
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  • From mykonosparadise on May 14, 2012
    noooooooooooo *sob*

    On the other hand, I'm really happy that you updated, I already began to think you've abandoned the story... Never mind me, I'm just a pessimist sometimes. Anyhow, I really loved the scene in the bath, but even though I expected some kind of a sad ending (I mean 'goodbye' never indicated anything good, eh?), I was still sad when I reached the bottom. I hope they'll come together again in the end
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  • From naturechild02 on May 05, 2012
    More please! It's dark but not that dark. Can't wait to see how Tsume proves his love for Toboe.
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  • From mykonosparadise on April 22, 2012
    Aww, man - please ignore my previous comment. I should have read the next chapter before actually posting, but I guess it was excitement and anticipation. Well anyway, I could drop another comment while I'm at it. To be honest, it's been a loooong time since I read a scene as good as this one. Wonderful. I don't know what the next chapters will bring, but I enjoyed these first 11 ones immensely.
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  • From mykonosparadise on April 22, 2012
    I just love this story. I've discovered it today and was smitten by it immediatelly. Right now, I'm at chapter 11, but what you said in the end intrigued me - so there's an uncensored version, if I understood correctly? I'd love to read it, if you could provide me with a link, of course.

    Thanks in advance, and thanks for the wonderful story. I hope my email shows, if not: mykonosparadise2@gmail

    (Now onto the next chapter, haha)
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