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Reviews for RRS : Roanapur Rape Stories

By : TentacleFan
  • From Zakeva on May 31, 2022

    Awesome first chapter 10/10 perfect fanfic score :)


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  • From Donglibog on July 11, 2017

    Just read the 1st story about Revy, and I'm already a fan. Well done.


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  • From ANON - Jack on April 23, 2016
    Where's the Roberta part?
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  • From ANON - ZeoUnit on December 09, 2014
    Well it looks nice so far. Not sure how do you plan to continue the story. Would be nice if plot get more deeper with more twists. Maybe add more more story with rock trying to find things out with what happened in the first chapter.
    The beast part.... Hmm... Nah... Its fine as it is for now and and yeah I agree it might turn some viewers.
    I would like said tryed to add more in story element's while you continue to write it.
    Best wishes and good writing from ZeoUnit
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  • From DrChristmas on June 04, 2013
    Yes! Exactly what I was hoping for with a Balalaika installment.

    And I would drown my own unborn children for a Beast Lagoon series.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Nemesis on June 04, 2013
    Enjoyed chap 4. Good, detailed descriptions. They took the right precautions for handling Balalaika. She is actually named for a musical instrument if you can believe it. Beastiality sounds fine. Maybe some Russian wolf-hounds for Balalaika and a pony for Eda (since she's an American `Cow-girl'). Looking forward to Yuna and friends.
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  • From ANON - MissEllie on May 27, 2013
    I want to reaffirm that I love this series and am eagerly looking forward to the Balalaika chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - MissEllie on December 19, 2012
    I'll admit, I'm not fond of the circumstances for Eda here - you've got her taking more-than-reasonable precautions to avoid trouble and make sure the deal goes smoothly, and yet she's outplayed and victimized anyway. It's one thing for Eda to lose because she's careless, overconfident, sloppy, or otherwise as a product of her character failings - quite another for her to be in a "can't win" situation because the men she's dealing with might as well be psychic.

    One of the things that makes the ladies of Black Lagoon so appealing for this style of fic is that they're generally tough, smart, and confident - and while Revy in Chapter 1 and Sawyer/Shenhua in Chapter 2 were overpowered in ways that are credible for their characters and their personal flaws, the same isn't true in Chapter 3 in which you essentially set Eda up to fail. I think that's something to be careful about when you're working on Chapter 4 - Balalaika, more than anyone else in the series, is a scary woman and probably the least likely person in Roanapur to expose herself carelessly or foolishly to danger, to say nothing of the rest of her crew. So in some ways, as a writer you're going to have to provide a stronger explanation of how her victimization comes about in order for that victimization to seem credible and for her ordeal to be enjoyable to the reader. The chase makes the capture sweeter, as it were.
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  • From ANON - ninesenshi on December 07, 2012
    Chap 3 is hot indeed, well written. Looking forward to Balalaika. Maybe with a big dog?
    Eager for more of Yuna's story also. Looking forward to Paine.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2012
    Chap 3 is hot indeed, well written. Looking forward to Balalaika. Maybe with a big dog?
    Eager for more of Yuna's story also. Looking forward to Paine.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - The Evening Primrose on September 25, 2012
    Lovin' it. Can't wait for the Balalaika chapter!
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  • From ANON - MissEllie on September 25, 2012
    Gotta love it. :)

    I think it's interesting that in your second chapter you've got Sawyer and Shenhua eventually providing some degree of comfort to one another during their ordeal - that's definitely one way to have it play out, another would have been for the gang to manipulate one of the two into betraying the other for her own relief, but I think I like the way you had it play out better.

    Looking forward to the remaining chapters, especially Balalaika's.
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  • From ninesenshi on September 16, 2012
    More hot stuff, well written. Hoping for more.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - esb1989 on September 13, 2012
    Great job! its been awhile sense a good black lagoon fic came out. keep it up!
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  • From ninesenshi on September 05, 2012
    Pretty hot, good idea for a series.
    SailorNemesis
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