Reviews for The aloha shirt

BY : Chaosmender


  • From ANON - Malevhaug on May 25, 2014

    THIS IS PRETTY MUCH THE BEST DAMN THING EVER.

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  • From ANON - Double Barrels on June 11, 2013

    Pretty good story. Looking forward to a second chapter.

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  • From ANON - Alexander Dietich on December 19, 2012

    I agree with Ninesenshi; very well written and great detail, the only thing that I can suggest is a spell check. Otherwise, it's perfect. I think this chapter could be a great foundation for a series, seeing this side of Revy was pretty cool. I think it could become a great story for the two to continue searching for happiness. :-) Awesome job! Definitely keep going!

    ~ Alexander

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  • From SailorNemesis on October 11, 2012

    Well, that was the best Black Lagoon fic I have read. And very good in general. Good job with the characters and scenario, sex was well written. You have a few errors that needed proof-reading (harsh son) etc. But overall great. I hope to see more.
    SailorNemesis

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