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Reviews for Romp For Perverts

By : kurahieiritrJIO
  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 17, 2013
    Wonderful, #28 Chapter 16B. The scenes, dialogue and things they are doing to one another are off the charts. My remembering of this particular chapter in the other piece of fiction doesn`t have the umph that this one has, very good my friend. I especially like how you get extra feeling out of the two young men. Naughty, naughty.
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  • From OldOwl on May 16, 2013
    OMG Okay, you got me blushing. The tenderness, dialogue, glimpses of where they are are on point. The care that goes into the blonde`s gentle taking of his teenaged love is awesome. Great work.
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  • From OldOwl on May 16, 2013
    24. Chapter 14. I remembered. I enjoyed the by play between the two men. The comraderie, sexy looks, dialogue and way Keisuke had takumi hanging there, wow. Well, you have a lot of talent my friend.
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  • From OldOwl on May 16, 2013
    22. chapter 13... If I had known before how sexy one can get in the shower, well.... The scenes, dialogue, tenderness and care are all great. You sort of feel like a peeping tom, although not quite. Enjoyed it a lot. Must keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 13, 2013
    Chapter 12. I keep forgetting to put down the chapter. Great sexual lust; dialogue superb; scene, a little risky. Wonderful my friend.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 13, 2013
    That sexy flirt, Takumi couldn`t keep his hands off his lover. That takes some thought. The sex described, the dialogue and the scene were well within your able fingers to make so. Ouch, Takumi`s leg in that brace makes it tricky to find a good way to go about loving him. Excellent my dear.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 13, 2013
    Naughty, naughty Keisuke. To be so much into someone is truly touching. The dialogue, the steaming scenes, and the tenderness shown by both men was astounding. Such gentleness and wonder at Keisuke`s care and concern. Awesome my friend.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 09, 2013
    How refreshing it is to see young love. Dialogue, setting and of course sex were amazing. The tenderness that Keisuke takes with his young paramor is sweet, and it tells of his feelings for Takumi. Wouldn`t change a thing.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 08, 2013
    OMG, okay, the flow of the characters lust is such that you want to go over those scenes over and over again. Dialogue, emotions and constant worry of Takumi`s that they need more practice on the passes is refreshing. I enjoyed the tentative way the 19 year old tries to please his lover is amazing. Such care usually comes after years of knowing one another. He is intent on pleasing his love.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 07, 2013
    Intense, emotional, wonder... That is how this chapter made me feel. Seen through other eyes. Dialogue, intense erotica, motions of lust(ok not lust close to it) awesome. You are learning how to make others feel as you do. Very good, in fact bordering on fantastic. Must go now.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 07, 2013
    What a wonder you are, my friend you made the act of making love expand. The scenes, dialogue, the way you have with telling me about a man making `woopie` with another man is delicious. You have the sensitivity to not make it harsh rather gentle. Wow! The trust Takumi has in his love make it all the more precious. Keep going friend. Must read more.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 07, 2013
    At first I thought you were cpoying yourself but then you put more meaning into your words, it was from someone else`s point of view. The way you have Takumi and Keisuke `feeling`each other out is entrancing. Dialogue, the many thoughts of Keisuke, and the blushing of Takumi are all right on point. Takumi isn`t sure about what to do. It`s as though this is his `first date` with anyone. Read on.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 06, 2013
    Okay, you have the way that they got used to being in each others presence established. You have the dialogue down pat. You have their obvious confusion with what they are doing to each other. Keisuke is the dominant one so far but... I`m pretty sure once they have sorted out who is to be dominant each time they1re together it will work out. You have the beginnings of a great story here.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on May 06, 2013
    Here I am again, I like how you start this story off. No denying whose talking to who. The puzzle in Takumi is an obvious give away. I don`t think he ever thought someone would care for him much less love him. I find this first chapter similiar to a first date, except it does go into more depth. Very good, you have my attention friend.
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd074 on December 14, 2012
    I can't tell you how happy I was to see this here. I have been reading your stories since I found them on FFnet. Sorry I couldn't review there I refused to ever be a member since the great purge way back when, so much good stuff was lost forever. But here I can read what I want to read. And your works are definitely something I want to read. I love how well written they are, wish I could be that good... Anyway I hope one day to see what happens after All For Love, if you write it. Thank you so much, I love Takumi, and you write him just as I like.
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