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By : Killermuffins
  • From Revolving_Dragunov on January 26, 2013
    Not bad. I must admit that I don't know anything about the Pokemon fandom, but I thought this story was really cute. The only real errors I could see with this story is that you said "expect" two times when it should have been "except". Overall, Good Job! :)
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