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Reviews for Driven Heart Prequel to Rivalry Series

By : kurahieiritrJIO
  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 29, 2013
    What an ending for a story. The technique that Takumi uses and used for each of the battles that he was in was striking, unorthodox and unique. Those things cannot be taught they have to be in the person. Excellent dialogue, Wonderful how you put me right there for the end of the race. This chapter was awe inspiring. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 29, 2013
    Oh my, well you certainly were right about Keisuke`s wet dream. He really is having a hard time accepting the fact that he loves Takumi. The images that you portrayed were direct and probably correct. The way you had Keisuke cleaning up his laundry makes it so much more apparent that he is totally confused about his feelings and doesn`t know what to do next. That is what I`m getting from this piece. Excellent as always. Keep writing my friend. I`ll keep reading.
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  • From OldOwl on April 28, 2013
    I had to keep reading until I reached the end of the race. Chapter 9-Paragraph 23 involved/invo9led. The way those racers made it through Akina was great. The power, the speed, the drifting... all were amazing. This was something to read until finished. Excellent on how you had the tension build as the radios kept you up to date on how everything was going. At the very last turn, eight six won. Kept me on the edge of my seat. Wow, wonder what else the three of them have in store for me. Got to go now.
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  • From OldOwl on April 28, 2013
    Wow!!!! Takumi really doesn`t understand that he has true talent when he gets behind the wheel. He drove to keep his dad`s business going. He isn`t the type of person to lie. Excellent dialogue, you could tell when Keisuke was talking and thinking, and his brother too. His brother wasn`t thinking so I could hear him. Must read more.
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  • From OldOwl on April 28, 2013
    That was some race. The way it was told to me was awesome. I`m not muchinto the racing scene but the race put me on the edge of my seat. Wow!!!! Takumi will someday be one hell of a street racer. The descriptions of how the eight six spun out and corrected its path were great. I`ll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 28, 2013
    I saw Takumi start and finish a race against that up-start Night Kids racer. Keisuke thought he had a handle on why he was having those strange feelings around Takumi, the kid was a damn good racer. Excellent on how you put the confusion in Keisuke`s mind. How Takumi handles the road is great. All in all a really good chapter. Read on.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 28, 2013
    Well, the race will begin, `seeing` Keisuke`s confusion about who the driver of the eight six is is understandable. How he wonders what his body is doing to him is too. Excellent timing with Takumi arriving just as their ready for the timed attack on Akina. Must keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 28, 2013
    Keisuke got beat by an old clunker of a car. What!!! He thought he was the only one who was fast enough to go down that mountain as quickly, but... Excellent how you had me picture the mini race as you did. Great on how very tired Takumi was before he got into his dad`s car. Very good chapter, must read on.
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  • From ANON - Old Owl on April 28, 2013
    Okay, I guessed I`d meet Keisuke before he saw Takumi, I just did. You know who is talking to who. The reaction of Keisuke when he first sees Takumi is an eye opener. He had just promised his brother that there would be no more same sex relationships for him. Going up the mountain he was still angry at Ryosuke but guessed he understood. Then he saw him... wham!!! Excellent how you set the stage for what comes next.
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